MISSING YOU

                   
 pretty things in your face

take inside wounds away
Can't see you
That is sure
You are at another shore

Days pass
Wounds grow more
Life is short
Will i see you before i go?

Author's Note

bear my thoughts

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Although this is short, it bears much pain and heartache. It is certainly a sad and unmistakable pain when you can no longer see that one you yearn for. A wondering piece, lovely.

[Gypsie]

Such a bitter sweet piece. It really is lovely and I enjoyed how you used "sure" and "shore"

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very simply written with a lot of honest emotion. Is the use of the small i, in reference to yourself?

[Lily Mae]

Love and sadness...beautifully expressed :) x

[Jill Wallflower]

aww short but sweet. Sad. I love it :)

[~Lizzy♬]

Beautiful write. It definately reminds me of my poems. :)

~Lizzard~

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is beautiful.. I love the meaning..
Short and simple.. I love it.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the sea transcends~ your lines are waves to shore~

[?]

Short, but packed with lot of meaning. Sensual and sad
Like this one
Beautiful

[Sunni Davis]

Very simple but with alot of meaning. I sense a longing and a heartbreak in your words.