I AM THE ONE WHO BROKE THE GLASS

YEA I DID IT

 Roads are long

For me are short

Mountains are high

For me, easy to be climbed

 

Winter and its winds

That is spring for me

Reason for all this!

With you, I will be my dear…

 

After a long, now that we meet

Words crying for missed time

Went out but not clear

 

Souls gladly intervened

“Shh

“Let’s use time

 Now, that we are near”

 

Time came for souls in chat.

“I am the one who broke the glass

I am the one who let the ball roll

But

Kindly help me in control

 

 Let us not care about the rest

Ties now

 Are different than before

 

At our shore……

Once, we use all our feet

 Stones will be buried in deep

After that

 Our caring hands will build a tree.

With warmth

We shall live under its leaves”

 

“Another chance you mean?

How can I believe you with no tears?

About tears!

 Ask me….

You work for it, and I will see”

Author's Note

hope u like it

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

It began with such a simplistic thought, and even as things became complicated further down the stanzas the message was still clear>> The winter would still remain spring>>>the mountains...still reachable>>>the long roads still short...as long as the souls are together>>>
Thoughtful poem...spectacular message>>

[Sunni Davis]

This is a wonderful poem. There's a strength and beauty running through this and makes it so lovely. Keep up the great work!

[biib]

oh wow...they are similar in idea.

[Magdelena]

Ahhh nice.. This I see you coming forth with a simple answer. With one by your side, things that are always hard, shall no longer be, for together you can conquer all. The sun is brighter, winds calmer, oceans bluer, and the tree to me represents everlasting peace. Two souls searching, then finding their true one. And in that all is possible and nothing is hardship when you both move forward into the hands of time. One should always take a second chance when it comes to love, and trust in the one to guide you along the way.

Wonderful!

[Stef Outsiders]

it is still good...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I find this poem to be very beautiful and I don't give a hang if the grammar is off or the moon falls from the sky and dances in circles. This is a beautiful piece.

[highthought]

Rain and winds

Are spring to me

Reason for this!

With you, I’ll be my dear…
its because i am going to see her
i am glad i see everything as spring
i dont care and winds and rain
its her ,my love ,heavy things are easy for me as long i am going to see her

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I like it but it needs some work though I felt like parts were missing. My fave line was Our caring hands will build a tree I thought that was pretty

[MichelleClay]

very nice

[Matthew Smith]

Let's see...

The poem was composed nicely. However, your grammar is off, as well as your punctuation. It makes reading through the work like trying to walk through mud--it slows it and interrupts the fluidity. Some things just made no sense, like: "rain and winds/are spring to me/reason for this!/With you, I'll be my dear."