THEY TALK AND I AM BUSY

I WASN'T FREE TO LISTEN TO THEM

They talk and they say

None of their words

Reaches my mind’s way

Busy with your charm!

Their words have no place

 

To their sight, I do look

So they believe that I have understood

My heart was caught by your eyes

Your eyes allow nothing to go through

Author's Note

what else ..........reviews

Reviews

[Nicole]

I like this one.

[highthought]

olivia u are right ...i ve managed it

[Olivia C. H.]

nice poem :) i guess its kinda like my "nothing" poem ...kinda sorta... :) really sweet but i would just check my grammar and whatnot. "Their words have no place". Other than that its fantastic

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Love this poem .. cannot look beyond the charm sometimes.. it is a good poem ... and congratulations !

Chloe

[Apathy To Empathy]

I understand how the emotions are displayed, and taken in. Great write, sweety. :}

[Lily Mae]

I understand this all too well. Sometimes people think you don't or aren't listening and yet you are intently. It's just that we don't always have to be reactive.. And the eyes always tell it all unless they are blocked by pain... Great write:) x

[Sunni Davis]

Great job and you're right it did make me smile!

[Magdelena]

Words, just that. merely words. One says things that they think will come forth sounding fab. In fact most all sugar coated.. Like the icing on a cake, a disguise for sometimes people see what they want to see, yet in the eyes, is the soul, there is where the truth lies. To me this piece is telling me that words mean nothing to you, it is what you see deep within, that is all you search for. Then it becomes meaningful

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I like this poem it could use some editing but nicely done I love last two lines they pulled on my heart a lil bit