LOVE

He said "I love u" she said "u lie "

He said

 "I love you"

She said

 "you lie"

Your health is good

so is your smile....

Love

 makes you ill

In love!

When they call you !

they get no reply.

love

leaves nothing !

but eyes to cry

Reviews

[Lexi Wolf]

Lovely. I like the use of speech quotes in the poem. The
"In Love!
When they call you!"
I find confusing however.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

very well written

[Catonia06]

great poem

[Stef Outsiders]

aww i like the way you've formatted this... setting a scene in this poem! its good!

[Sunni Davis]

so heartbreaking. Think is a great example of the colder side of love.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I like and it is a bit sad. it was a good read well done

[highthought]

In love there are degrees
that's the highest it could be

[Magdelena]

I found this sad.. Your ending made me weep almost..

Mags xx

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

I like it.
But In my opinion what I thought after i read this is how i beieve love is NOT real... no matter how you put it...

[JulieNorell]

Aww! Sad but pretty! For some reason when I read this I imagined the narrator would have a British accent! Haha im silly! :) Good write!