LOVE

He said "I love u" she said "u lie "

He said

 "I love you"

She said

 "you lie"

Your health is good

so is your smile....

Love

 makes you ill

In love!

When they call you !

they get no reply.

love

leaves nothing !

but eyes to cry

Reviews

[Brinleigh Bailey]

The short and simple get to the point subject of "Love is bad!" was portrayed well in this poem. It was clever with the hint of truth as well. Well done.

[highthought]

he surrounded to his love and that was his end .. i wouldn't say love is bad...i would say let it comes in but do not swim to the max

[B]

I love your work

Very witty and smart

Not to mention playful

Just as is the nature of love

Thank you for sharing :)

[A]

I liked how you took such a common point of he said she said and something that is true, trust is hard to obtain... good write

[Olivia Marie]

Sweet, short, and I like how you started it off with dialogue in the poem. Adds a sense of communication to the love. I like it :)

[PJ]

short sweet poetic sad

[Roxi L]

Simple and Sweet. Such a nice poem.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[~Unashamed Love~]

Very true, I like the short verses, straight forward yet eloquent.

[Aurora Lynn]

You are right, the answer to te poem Do I Love Him? is in this poem!

A very well done piece. Thank you for writing.

[A.E. Surdam]

Very poetic. And so simple and sweet. Nice!

[A]

Nicely written, I like the ending.