WHO AM I ? (Part 5 ) The end

LOVE WINS ON DIRT

 Dirt was thick and high.

 Water used was little but shine

More water is to be givin in

Cleaning has to be done for dirt remained.

 

The river of the visitor on board started to flow !

"Take the boat but leave us alone"

The lake' s settler was surprised with joy

“That’s the deep seas of which I was told”

 

“Deep seas!

What a thought ? “

That was the empty rose's talks.

 

“It's a place which you will never go

We are getting married,

 take your new toy and go.”

 

She decides without asking her loving guy

In love !

There is not low and high

 

In love !

It isn't I say or you say

Our aim is the same

Tied is how we stay.

 

His heart was hit.

Now !

His life!

 Will have a special taste

 

THE END

Author's Note

i have an opened heart for any critic

Reviews

[Muse]

A prose inside a story, nicely penned.

[Stef Outsiders]

WOW, damn that was an ending! you did well with this one...

[Magdelena]

Fantastic changing! It flowed right through.. Bravo my friend. You really bright this one straight home.

Mags xx

[Libby]

I really like the changes by the way, It reads a lot better now c:

[Libby]

This set of poems is really outstanding. I don't have the patience/stamina to write so much.

[Magdelena]

Hmmmm, interesting, okay now this is the last.. Your ending stanza said it all. For in love there is no winners. Both are. Only two that share the same heart and soul. No need for questions, answers for no fear on misunderstanding. A great thing, don't you think? To never fear being misunderstood?

I get it, very good. Who am I? Why I am peace, happiness, I am love. That's what I got from all this..

This rocked!!!