WHO AM I ?

We do not know how , and why , but we feel it and we see its reacts

 

 

 

" Waves were high and wild

till I reached your sight

warmth , softness

penetrated  inside

once I saw your eyes

 

Attraction in your face

pushed beauty of the lake away

without permission from you to ask

hand was told by heart

"touch her face at once"

 

"Who are you? "

she asked.

I had the answer

but I was dazed by eyes

"No need to say names

common thoughts

took titles away "

That was my reply

 

One thing i said more

"I want you in life

you have the key of my hidden inside

from now and so on

your moves will dance together with mine

 

Reviews

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this is sweet. Its very soft-spoken and gentle. I'm guessing you speak another language?
You may want to go through after you post and read through your stuff carefully to see if you can find any spelling errors. When writing it can take away from the reading for some while others graciously accept human error.
There wasn't a lot just a hint hint...
Look at your first stanza again and check out the word inside.

Beautiful writing :)

[Stef Outsiders]

Aww, this is good! you've catch the image well...