RAIN

Rain s effect on US

Rain's drops glance here and there

refreshing green,melting sand

Rocks stays as it was

as nothing has touched it's parts

 

Love's waves strokes all along

Some gets healed,some gets touched

Some gives no change

Sending rain in vain

 

Which ones are we..

We do know,we do feel

Its hard to give all our bad things a leave

From caring persons,we took a lot of green

why don’t we start paying back at least

Roses might be spread again

in here and in there

At then,life will have a different taste

 

REMEMBER!

DAYS WON'T STAY THE SAME

 

Reviews

[Carolina Kel]

This is a good start and I love the idea you're conveying here, but the grammar could use a little tune up.

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

I like it.
keep writing :)

[Stef Outsiders]

Stunning Imaginary...

[Sunni Davis]

This is so beautiful. I love the images you created.

[Lenard L. Banks III]

Beautiful write.