RAIN

Rain s effect on US

Rain's drops glance here and there

refreshing green,melting sand

Rocks stays as it was

as nothing has touched it's parts

 

Love's waves strokes all along

Some gets healed,some gets touched

Some gives no change

Sending rain in vain

 

Which ones are we..

We do know,we do feel

Its hard to give all our bad things a leave

From caring persons,we took a lot of green

why don’t we start paying back at least

Roses might be spread again

in here and in there

At then,life will have a different taste

 

REMEMBER!

DAYS WON'T STAY THE SAME

 

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Much food for thought here in your beautiful poem. Makes one stop and think, which one am I? Do I thrive as these raindrops touch upon my soul or do I stay the same. Lovely!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I like this one too lol its different and touching well done

[Paige-Louise JessicaBun..]

Very pretty poem!! its realy sweet and relaxing to read. keep up the good work!!

[JulieNorell]

This is a very good write! Very similar to mine haha!

[Magdelena]

Wow.. Now this touched me. Your last lines were astounding.. I so love your imagery. It like soothing, taking one along for a gentle ride..

Loven it!
Mags xx

This is really great! I love the last four lines, especially the last one. Reminding us all that time changes, love/beauty can come again. :) Fantastic!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I chose Rain to read because i do love rain. You used it as renewal in your poem.
It is truly a lovely poem and giving back is always good.
I enjoyed your Rain poem.



"We do know ,we do feel

Its hard to give all our all our bad things a leave

From caring persons, we took a lot of green

why don’t we start paying back at least

Roses might be spread again

in here and in there

At then ,life will have a different taste

REMEMBER, days won t stay the same"

Good last line so true.

Chloe

[Libby]

I like this, I got a strong feeling of nostalgia from it. c:

[Gemma Elizabeth]

There are a few grammar mistakes but its a interesting read. I love the how you compare the rain with love. What you've put in the first part is especially true. I'm not an expert in poetry but it seems a good one XD