RAIN

Rain s effect on US

Rain's drops glance here and there

refreshing green,melting sand

Rocks stays as it was

as nothing has touched it's parts

 

Love's waves strokes all along

Some gets healed,some gets touched

Some gives no change

Sending rain in vain

 

Which ones are we..

We do know,we do feel

Its hard to give all our bad things a leave

From caring persons,we took a lot of green

why don’t we start paying back at least

Roses might be spread again

in here and in there

At then,life will have a different taste

 

REMEMBER!

DAYS WON'T STAY THE SAME

 

Reviews

[WordShaker33]

Great poem. I loved the duscriptive detail.

[Olivia Marie]

I loved it! I truly did :) One one thing and it's a grammar thing. You put a space before your commas. That's not grammatically correct. It may be a typo, but I point it out because I happened twice. Otherwise it's great :) I highly enjoyed reading it :)

[Haley Hisel]

I like it, its nice.

[EMW]

Great poem. Has great detail and flows perfectly

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I liked reading this very refreshing piece of poetry. The thought behind it and the images it creates. Nice work

[Aurora Lynn]

Good poem! I liked the general concept that you wrote about! Good job.

~Aurora

[A.E. Surdam]

Wow, very beautiful. I love the imagery and how you created the words, once again, beautiful.

[Gypsie]

What a lovely concept. It is a bit of a rebirth, isn't it. Good write.

[?]

Well now this is a nice poem, I choose rain, because rain gives back to us the green earth, flowers , a renewing of the earth lets say.
This is very good Highthought. Lots of wonderful meaning

[Lily Mae]

We are nothing without the rain... :) x this is a great write:) xx