Falling trust

it happens a lot

The story began
when she was married to that man
Her love to him was proven by her gifts
Money, house, store and many things .,,
they had two boys and a girl 
covered by love and care
by her own parents
Until an evil woman crossed the step of the family door 
spreading fake care and joy
Gaining the trust of the loyal wife to the most
So the wife told her secrets and kept her close 
Until one day the plot was shown
The evil woman with the husband were alone
Sharing bed and more 

Behind closed doors the wife shed her tears
Thinking of the betrayal of whom supposed to be a dear
Ohh husband ....
My love to you was on the top of the hill
You threw it down so I am vanished ...

Her beautiful white face became red all the time 
She kept silent wherever she was at 
Not revealing a thing of what is in her depth
Pain in her heart grew and grew 
Until her brain took the stroke 

Now, at the hospital where she lays 
The medical machines to her body were connected 
Providing what it takes to keep her away from been ruined 
but all this was stopped 
When the cheater ordered the doctors to turn them off

The wife’s supposed dreams were taken away 
Joined with sand in her grave 
Leaving the man with his sins

allowing a witch to raise his own kids

Author's Note

this is the first poem since i have last stop writing ..so help me to get my feet back on track

Reviews

[dan]

when a love is torn asunder by a betrayal of trust the relationship is effectively dead already, so pulling the plug on the woman stricken by illness is indeed an extension of the ORIGINAL betrayal on a much more grand and sinister scale. a story well told, one that touched my heart, which felt your pain. a splendid write, sir. take care...dan

[highthought]

Having this from you Dan is a great lift for me in my writing ,I ll work harder to gain more of your trust ..thank you

[SheIsYourCyn]

Even though English is not your first language I understand what you are trying to say.

Good job being descriptive.

[highthought]

sometimes out of pain we might learn something ....thank you ,,,happy that u like it

[Annie Gryphon]

this is so touching and sad, and such a long story in these few lines, i think you did a very good job!

[highthought]

yea i didnt work much on feeling after all the message is in the story it self thx Annie for passing by