Winds of the Spring

Love heals like the winds of the spring

Author's Note

This is my first short poem

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

Out of minimalism comes a universal truth. This indeed a poem Highthought. A mighty fine one at that

Ken e

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

In these very wise words is a gem. Love can heal just about anything:)

[highthought]

In old poetry based on true facts ..true love heals from madness and make forget that ure hungry , thirthty

[Confuser]

highthought: not sure if this is the poem you meant, or the line but it is lovely. The wind with so much power I see it visually, like the force of a hurricane, or a breeze in the spring, ripples upon the water, or in the summer when it's hot and we need, and adore that feeling. Since your title is Winds of the Spring, I conceive this is springtime love, all the newness, and beauty coming to life, but then, I'm seeing the wind also as a true part of us all - a connection with all nature and it's wonder, like love and spring both are connected equally. Taken literally, it's sweet - maybe I go too deep. No matter. I enjoyed it. Thank you so very much. Dale

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Yes, it does when it is true and contains real trust.
Your short responses remind me of Camus and his reflections on life.
:)

[highthought]

Josie this is only a line of a poem of mine called Winds ..wish u have time to read it

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Well, this all read here, and it did remind me of Camus and his haunting desire to change the world. I have time to read poetry every day because I take the time to do so.

[Briana O'Connor]

Such a beautiful quotation of the elegance of love. The metaphor you used is very vivid and relatable. Nicely penned. I also believe this could be a great first line to an even longer piece.

[highthought]

It is actually a line of a poem of mine it's called Wind ...I can send u a read request

[Briana O'Connor]

Feel free to send me any requests. I always respond as quickly as my laziness will let me :P I only ignore the ones of ppl who do not return the favor.

[Jesse]

Hahaha....... Got it! Nice too.

[highthought]

Thanks Jesse glad u like it ..it's only a line of my poem Wind ..I ve post it just to submit toa contest of six words only

[WordShaker33]

"Love heals like the wind of Spring". What a beautiful thought. However, this definitely needs a few more lines. How exactly does love compare to that of the winds of spring? Add a few more lines that express this idea, string them together, and you've got yourself a wonderful poem:)

[highthought]

I have changed some words in the poem responding to my friends reviews so the poem will have a clearer meaning

[JayceeC]

This almost has a haiku feel to it. It's very good what you have but I would like the third line. possibly written in 7 syllables since these are in five. Not true haiku/senryu form, but the 5-7 gives balance. Think on it. Its a beautiful thought, but it's just drifting here without an anchor.
This may just be a nit pick on my part, because of my love for the Japanese forms. Or it may be because I can give you no form, a metered couplet...maybe. Could call it Monometer, although generally more lines, sighs...can't find a category, but it's still a lovely, lovely though.
~jan

[highthought]

the fact is that this is not a real poem i ve just picked those lines from a poem of mine just submitt to a contest where they asked for a poem of 6 lines so its not my real work but i ll go further reading ur work

[JayceeC]

So now you have a monoline poem...there is a name for the form but it escaped me right now....lol

[highthought]

I have never learn poetry nor I have never finished a book in my life so I wouldn't know .. I ve managed it .. So what u think of it now

[JayceeC]

add... to it and your good. If you have an interest in writing, start reading. Check out profiles about the author. Most of us who have been writing a while note that in our profile. Also check out the forums where there is the help of more experienced writers and some courses. Learn the terms. The better you get at picking things out in others works, the better writer you become. I did not become a good writer overnight and I could argue there are many far better than me, but learning to comment does help. You learn as you go.

[Brittany Zedalis]

For your first, it's very well done. I like it.

[highthought]

getting this from you means something for me, think i am going to write more like that

[Brittany Zedalis]

Go for it! ^-^

[highthought]

k use ur glasses deeply once u read poems like this for me because you pushed me for it