the world

the world

A Poem by tata young
"

i feel this is all true

"

this is not true

it is no place for the light

the darkness will always shine through

the time will always

be right

we call it a world of

strenght

but in truth we are all weak

in this world of darkness

we see what we want to see

© 2012 tata young


Author's Note

tata young
plz dont be mean im new at the hole darkness thing

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really good, good message behind it. Love the theme, only critique is to fix the spelling mistake "strenght" to "strength"

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 15, 2012
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tata young
tata young

waikfield, NH



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i have been kicked off alot of my crap but im sill writing so yay more..

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