Someone I admire

Hio avid poem mates. Here it's my second poem. I've penned this poem for my school competition. The topics were given to us like' someone you admire ' or 'stop and pray'.so I have chosen this topic.

Someone I admire

My father deserves to be admired,
Cause he's my family Satisfier.

He looks towards all our tantrum,
And makes our problem appear phantom!

He is the solution of every problem,
whether it is theory of quantum.

Any difficulty is nothing in front of us,
As long as he is with us.

I wish, I can be like him
Hope my desire allows me to trim!!

Author's Note

If there is some shortcomings plz bring them in my notice. And don't forget to review 😊

Reviews

[Muskan]

Nothing is equivalent to a father's love and sacrifice.
It was a good one dear Ankur

[Ankur]

Thank u so much this means a lot to me

[Mihika_d]

Father's love is unconditional. Awesome piece frnd! Keep writing, keep sharing

[Ankur]

Thx 😘😘😘😘

[Yashika]

Amazing...the thought as well as the words used for comparison 👌👌

[Ankur]

Thx for the support

[Yashika]

That's my pleasure ✌

[Ankur]

😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

[Yashika]

Keep going...Many more expected