fool's game of contrived cake

Torn 'tween the you in me

      and the me in you,

lesser treason's dissension

seize the day's analogies,

   distinction mid sensibilities & logic

fell into the rabbit hole of yearning

debated a fool's game of contrivance,

   reasoning had no rhyme

           as time skipped the line

left to my own mixed metaphor

           devices in clear contention,

surrender an option only for 

         the faint of consciousness,

karmic forces overwhelmed the cake

   left out in the surrealistic reign 

Author's Note

what else?

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Your poetic sensibilities are strongly tied to your soul. I like the edge you give to poetic verse.

Regards,
Al

[Chris]

whom could ever top Richard Harris... sigh

[MomzillaNC]

Right out of the gate… a stunner! Terrific lines "fell into the rabbit hole of yearning; debated a fool's game of contrivance,"

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much MomZ, tried to keep my game up whilst I was away, thrilled you enjoyed.

[MomzillaNC]

Thrilled to see you back!

[Saddam]

That's all I want to see in my write. This is fabulous, Great read dear friend. I love it.

reasoning had no rhyme
as time skipped the line

[Frieda P]

I'm so jazz'd, thanks muchly my sweet friend, I've missed you.

[Saddam]

I miss you too dear. You are most most welcome.