Unfamiliar love rhyme in no particular order...‏

I cherished you in no particular order,

   a persuasion's constant craving

   round all seasons and wrong reasons

    against the grain and under my skin,

poetic scenery abounded in rhythmic symmetry 

  sights set on ivory towers amongst ethereal clouds

    & endurance of climax's flawless forecasts,

seascapes' jagged edges told another tale

   leaving me forlornly stranded amidst a deserted isle

     whilst burnished horizons aptly disappeared 

       into dull hazes of unfamiliar love stories's rhymes

Author's Note

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

what a bittersweet piece that hits me as no one else can Frieda.. more than a few lines packed a poetic punch in places that proved powerful.. ha!.. say that three times fast... you always write with enchanting elegance no matter what subject.. to touch with words can be both a blessing and a curse.. we, as writers are sometimes more vulnerable than others for we feel them more deeply and the impact more profound.. may not see the rhyme or reason at the time, but eventually the imagery becomes clear and the effect felt.. so nice to see you back ma'am.. breathtaking as usual..

[Moonie]

What a beautiful love poem... and what a wonderful song!!! Ed sheeran is one of my favourite artists. You really know how to add the required seasoning to any poem. This one is so different from all the love poems that I've previously read. Welcome back! :) :)

[Marie]

Oh Frieda, I don't really like love poetry. Yet you seem to speak to my heart, still yearning after those ivory towers...

[Sami Khalil]

Masterful and impact-full like usual. Always to be treasured...:).......

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love has no rules, regulations or order… to love someone means letting go of all logic.

[Frieda P]

Ain't that the truth, I'll never learn, thanks again Dale...

[Rene Salinas]

Welcome back!

Your presence has been missed! In more ways than one!

Another page written in the unravelling of painted scenes. The feeling of missing -- a sensation and perceptions which seem to be related to a type of love that is careful, but still expecting. Wondering if it will change into something else. Leaving you standing, thinking that it is a feeling you must oversee from a distance. With caution.

Nowadays caution seems like a healthy thing...

Very glad to witness the continuation of your journey.

Thank - You.

[Frieda P]

Thanks again Rene for welcoming me back so warmly. We tend to throw caution to the wind as they say, when it comes to favors of the heart. Healthy never comes into play...silly I know.

[Rene Salinas]

So much to risk? So unafraid! So reckless or so trustingly in love with love....

[Frieda P]

I'd much rather risk being in love with hot flesh and blood, in love with love is pointless.

[Gee]

What a great read,and I understood it!

[Frieda P]

Gee, thanks Gee, jazzed you did, sometimes I don't get my own! Muchly appreciated. :)

[Gee]

"Jazzed you did"might have to slip that into a poem!You're welcome

[Frieda P]

We're all 'jazzed' in joisey, be my guest...

[Ed Fagan]

Right out of the gate you hit us with this? Welcome back and great job!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly for the warm welcome and sweet comment Ed ! :)