LOVE (10W)

                         

Author's Note

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Reviews

[realmwriter]

A heart apart, torn asunder. The sting of something gone. You felt it once. you miss it now. But for all the pain of not having know it, we still find love. We fall in and out. We scream, break, shout. We curse the day we met. But for all the fear of having never known it, we still find love. It know nothing of the things for which we attend it. Love is blind to the pain for which we offend it. Love cannot feel the fear we impart upon it. But there it always is, in the heart and soul. Ever waiting for us to find it.

You wrote something so simple and so succinct. Pointed directly where it is needed most. A topical solution to heel what might be broken. Very good write indeed.

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks so much realmwriter, I appreciate all the time you put into my wee 10 word poem, your review is poetry...!

[realmwriter]

Insperation comes from many places. You are welcome.l

[NeiL ArandA]

There's not much need for me to say further - RealmWriter said everything that need to be said. Concise but consistent. If the heart rhymes it is in Normal Sinus Rhythm.

" Love is blind to the pain for which we offend it. Love cannot feel the fear we impart upon it. But there it always is, in the heart and soul. Ever waiting for us to find it. "

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much. Nice quote, who wrote that one Neil?

[NeiL ArandA]

If the heart rhymes it is in Normal Sinus Rhythm ... Its a medical term that states the heart is functioning normally without aberrancy...

[Lyn Anderson]

These short writes sometimes just cut right in and leave a bruise. Well done, point taken.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, I knew you'd get this one...

[s y e]

Simple yet not simple... there are many ways someone could interpret this and many ways it can be taken. I did love this one, funny how 10W is all you really need to explain something so delicate... lovely as ever, Mama F xoxo

[Frieda P]

Sorta like life, thanks muchly noodlebumble! xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

hahaha, now that is very clever Moonbeam.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Dale, loving these 10 word poems, they make you work for it. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes they most certainly do. I enjoy the challenge.

[Frieda P]

I tend to get wordy, in case you didn't notice :) so these are definitely a great challenge.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I will admit that had to be hard for you, LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha I was waiting for you to nab me. haha

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, now this one made me think.....imagine the possibilities! :)

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished. ;)

[BennyBooth]

Simple, but not so simple.... i like it Frieda :))

[Frieda P]

Ha I like that Benny, thanks muchly! :)