" runaway strangers
to have their own way
free falling from the skies" - wonderful line! Love what it says and the flow.
You and Kubla have such similar styles, was this a coincidence or do you inspire each other haha.
Lots of good sinister imagery. :)
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Thanks so much Frontier, I didn't think so but many people have said, that's quite the compliment si.. read moreThanks so much Frontier, I didn't think so but many people have said, that's quite the compliment since I think Steve is genius. :)
those filters get clogged up and skewed with time, and that chance sanity becomes more distant of a possibility it seems like sometimes... another well done piece ma'am.. never heard this song.. makes it more haunting...
We dream what we think, that is stored in our sub-conscious mind and all these imagery are part of it. This shows a gloomy side of yours, nightmare, perhaps.
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Nightmares into daymares perhaps....thanks Mayank.
I felt caught on another plane until the sun rose and made me feel safe again. Our existence is surreal our pain so real and our joy so fleeting. I think it is why I like Iceland with its 24 hours of sun in the summer, perhaps I could drink coffee all day and keep the ghosties and bogarts at bay.
Such wording here leaves me in awe...breathless actually...for as much darkness gasps within this, light breathes with double strength...you are one talented soul xo
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You humble me with your kind words Poppy, thanks so much beautiful lady. xo
// biting master plan scenario,
haunting reverberation's, escort
splintered runaway strangers
to have their own way
free falling from the skies, //
Your imagery is gorgeous Frieda. Really, you have taken me into a whole other world with this one, the wording and imagery is spot on and poetic techniques are on point - as always. Really, I am your number one fan, this is out of this world...xoxo
Gloom is blooming again on your castle but still looks magnificent. Going through your poetry is always like maneuvering through clouds, right now they are darker ones. It means it will rain soon and the sun will shine again.
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Castles in the clouds, you got it in one Avinash. :)
a nocturnal receptacle to careen my half empty being spilled over the edge, bubonic bottled in the cutlery of one with scars...good piece
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Your reviews are always better than my poems, thanks mojo. :)
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no way...please stop saying that..your work has a balance I never have... and I fall off the edge sa.. read moreno way...please stop saying that..your work has a balance I never have... and I fall off the edge salad tossed in thought and it's just what your poetry does for me..a-muse- ment..no tooting of horns I am incapable of such bullying..
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..