Synchronicity of rhythm's rhyme ~

      

 A

rose on wings 

             of poetry's flight,

      fire within

        leaked through

             inky passages,

     mindful reminisces

          singing of heart,

rendered lyrics of

 exhaustive

            mind f*****g songs,

broken pieces

                 & puzzle's shadow,

bird's of paradise

  

soar to surrender in

       ocean's depths 

                   of forgone seasons,

      wildflowers whirling on 

                    baby's breath zephyrs,

             blood spilled 

                in the name of the father,

 cosmic encounters

                under moonlit excursions,

whimsy of fairy dust

                 upon fluffy icicle clouds

posh feathers tickling

          perfumed leather & lace,

     took the long way

 home 

       on the road less

           traveled of poesy,

          transporting phases

                   as phantasm's heights

 dance in the 

       synchronicity

         of

                         rhythm's 

                                    rhyme

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

This makes me wonder and send me en- dreaming I had to make that word up I think I don't have any other way to share with you what it is that happens to me when you write this way. But the opposity of a logical intruction manual like them used in Ikea Step 1 do this step 10 you have achived this. Imaginative - thinking maybe but it comes short as well. I feel as if it was a passage of yourself , breathing , consuming , changing, and how different influences affect your life. I just admire the way you share it. Of course as I have confessed early I am only glad that I can accompany your journey.

Won't even try walking in your shoes probably I 'll get blisters.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

Woo your review blew my skirt up this morning Rene. Love the new word, apropos, we're all dreamers in our own unique way, no? That's why I'm more comfortable in flip flops, exposed and no blisters. Grazie mille.

[AprilRN1210]

Never heard this interpretation of this song... love it... haunting... affecting.... added such depth and tone to this write... You know I am such a fan when it comes to your ability to do this so beautifully... that by itself is so impressive, but then your phrasing and flow hit so hard in exactly the way you skillfully set them to... this is WHY you are one of my favorite poets... i LOVE writes that make me FEEL and the depth at which you MAKE ME FEEL is impressive and POWERFUL... you, ma'am are awesome... I hope you know just how awesome you are... as a person, as a writer, and as a friend... ((hugs)) to you...

[Mayank]

I love the spiral flow here, it's really very fascinating and imaginative. There are various small dots which are connected here, you read it again and find something new.. reading between the lines definitely helps ;)

[Avinash]

Beautiful, musical darkness and pulsating heart all in sync in this one poem.

[Rita L. Sev]

A whirlwind of images and emotion, Frieda. I read it a few times, and each time I lingered on your first line, reading it as "Arose on wings..." one moment, then as "A rose on wings..." the next - and the poem changed. Intentional or not, you have written a piece here that will touch the reader one way on Monday, and quite differently on Tuesday...

[Patricia]

Surreal and it echoes long after it is read. You just have to spend time with it, it becomes a part of the reader and the reader part of the poem. Love the lay out and the music and this is a very talented penned piece, feels smokey, and I like that :D

[NoelHC]

Sweet dreams, one of my favorite Annie Lennox tunes, I had not heard this version before, and sweet words to go with it. Well done.

[R Smith]

Had me hooked in first 2 lines wings of poetry's flight, magnificent! from there it was a roller coaster of a ride, I think it took me to every dimension of life and then threw me out of the car at the top of the ride, excitement does not do it justice and i'm heading for the gate to start again, any one lend me the price of admission :)

[wordman]

a mystical dream of writing poetry with a sense of excitement and enchantment on the journey
great write good choice in music

[MomzillaNC]

A rather dreamy, surreal write… like floating down a gentle, sunlit stream, but with occasional rocky, white water patch.

[Matching Socks]

I like this one, the words carry the reader from nutty scattered to that feeling of knowing and moving in parallel alignment. Two hearts, beating in just one drum... Or is it time?

What's that song? Phil Collins? I think... It's an old one.