sounds like a few clubs i've been in,
he whispered in
lush hushes
as a bluesy
untamed melody
played on ghostly
violin strings,
spun of eerie tunes
in ending's rhyme, one of the most beautiful pieces of work I have read. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Wow thanks so much Richard, you've humbled me my crazy friend. :)
10 Years Ago
crazy huh! thar's gold in them thar' hill o' beans.....I'll have you know :P
Top-notch poetry that resonates life, love and nature in their fullest impact on our strengths and frailties.
I hope all is well in your world as they are in your word.
dearest Frieda… you were a Poet when I first joined WC. It was a Magic time before the Corona Virus and now the effort to destroy everything that made our Country Great… being destroyed by Insane Politicians that throw our Tax money around like an Earthquake out of Control… Open Borders, no Accounting… offering Free Healthcare and Education … when the Immigrants own Countries should have kept their Citizens with Laws and Order and Principles.
G-d help us All. Amen .. Pat
(he whispered in lush hushes as a bluesy untamed melody played on ghostly violin strings) What a hauntingly beautiful line this is! I love the entire post. Great writing! ~Sharon
Fantasy ..You make love seem like reality but no matter how great people describe love to be I will always compare it to these haunting fantasies you've accustomed to me. I would listen to the sad tune of life through the violin of bones only to wait for said mockingbird to strike an artery and let the love blood flow once more.
man i missed this beautiful words its been too long! love the beauty you put into each and every poem you write frieda, its wonderful. oh so wonderful and marvelous and you are a blessing to the writers cafe world! now its time for chemistry homework have a great day!
Frieda, the many and varying facets of your genius leaves me in awe. The woman who brings us high heeled red spiked shoes, pens this masterpiece of reverence and reflection. It was an honor to read this one. So incredibly beautiful..
Just beautiful! the way you put your words together seems so effortless! You convey emotion and melancholy in the most wonderful of ways! You are too good! Where can I buy your book??? :))
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..