Swallow (10 W)

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Well I think I started this somewhere in the middle but the humour behind this, is energising to say the least and as I see the impulse spreading to others writers it makes me wonder if the development of this theme will lead to episoded entitled Spit and of course Gargle.

Or did I again get a completely different meaning.....

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

The meaning is left in your hands once it leaves my pen...Spit & Gargle haha ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

"...ocean's swallow" captivates my mind ..

"Ren� Quinton, French biologist/physiologist, proved that pure seawater is virtually identical to mammalian blood plasma. With the assistance of many eminent physicians, he successfully used seawater as a healing agent on thousands of patients in France and Egypt in the early 1900s.[i] Navy doctors successfully used seawater during the Second World War when blood serum supplies ran out."

*Medical Miracles from the Sea
Source by Dr. Mark Sircus, Ac., OMD

our hometown Wellness Center recently added a salt water pool to the facility ..
i love to watch swallows in flight .. and the Martins .. they are incredible birds ..
and so, by choice,my thoughts are directed .. ;) i wonder if my testosterone levels need a boost! hmmmmmmmmm :) what an intriguing little piece you shared this morning!
E.

[Frieda P]

Whoa your review is better than my poem dear E! Smart cookie you. ;) x

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you doll .. but its your poem that inspires .. i love the meditation of simply dissolving into that wave ... it would be a good way to go says i! returning to the source so to speak .. i tell my children that they don't have to worry about my funeral because i am simply going to walk into the forest and dissipate :)

[Frieda P]

Wouldn't that be luverly, but I do want to be part of the salty seas. :)

[R Smith]

At once beautiful and downright dirtyyyyyy, or is it just me.....this is Frieda so......'nah' its just my murky mind, lovely poem dear girl and in only 10 words, you speak an ocean of dreams, :)

[Frieda P]

Ha you make me laugh Richard, it's whatever you want it to be. :)

[R Smith]

ok then its a dirty ocean of dreams and I want to dive in! :)

[Frieda P]

Once it's out there, you can do with it what you wish, you perv. ;) haha

[R Smith]

me! perv! no mrs never, hang on just changing to my swimsuit, be back soon, oh! its wet out there......:P

[Frieda P]

Ha I meant that in the best way possible, if there is one. ;)

[R Smith]

Haha too late now, I stand with the pervs or is that we stand together, well something is standing any way hahahahaha :P

[Frieda P]

OMG I'm not touching that, not one word.....

[R Smith]

I quit the council of perv"s, so I stand DOWN!!! hahahahaha nice poem by the way :)

[Frieda P]

You're a nutter Richard. :)

[R Smith]

you face just changed :)

[Frieda P]

Some days you just need a change, this was one of those. :)

[R Smith]

looking good kid :)

[Frieda P]

In my dreams, I wish! :)

[R Smith]

don't knock yourself, you have a beautiful mind as well :)

[Frieda P]

You're a sweetie, nutters but cute. :) I think she was most beautiful woman ever...

[R Smith]

Aw shucks! Maam, i'm just a fan of yours

[Frieda P]

Ditto that!

[Ruth]

Damn! Hon, you blister my rationale at times lol I am left swirling...epic piece...gorgeous xo

[Frieda P]

Ahh that tickled and made me giggle, thanks beautiful! xo

[Baby Ricochet]

That's kinda hot..................

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.....

[NoelHC]

Nicely alliterated. Sibilant.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Noel, my first 'sibilant'....

[Matching Socks]

Oh really? :)
Do tell....

[Frieda P]

Well, just between us gals. ... ;)

[kublakhan27]

I was just on my way out the door when I noticed this...of course it took me forever to see the clip cuz youtube ALSO has been giving me trouble today...I mentioned before that this sounded like a feminized Leonard soundbite...I find that her lyrics come close...both are obviously big influences ;) But you never truly sound like anyone else love...your writing is you, and it's phenomenal, and ten words is more than enough to make that point ;) xo

[Frieda P]

'feminized Leonard soundbite'...*faints* You know I'm framing this, right? ;) Swooning.... xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha No lie Mrs.R, that's what it sounds like ;) xo

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmmm this is beautiful chica but why do you persist in making me think.I won't have it I tell you lol

[Frieda P]

Keeps your pazzo arse out of trouble! lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha you would think so but I have a dragon breathing down my neck because I poked him when April warned me not to lol

[Frieda P]

Oh he's really a chicken in disguise, have no fear! lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ohhh good to know .I suddenly have a hankering for bar b que lol

[Frieda P]

LOL pass the hot sauce....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha you're speaking my language lol

[redflutterby]

Not sure what to think of this one....haha!

[Frieda P]

Good, that was my intention! Score! haha ;)

[redflutterby]

oh so you like confusing the confused??? Ha....

[Frieda P]

I don't like being the only one confuzzeled! haha

[redflutterby]

I see....misery loves company!! ;-P