Disillusion'd apostrophes

Disillusion'd apostrophes

A Poem by Frieda P
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Random silly scribble after chatting with jacob's

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Everything's coming up dandelions,
inky destruction of apostrophis'd delusions,
as desecrat'd, disconnect'd decay dilut'd in
dissect'd distraction's dysfunction,
debilitating destiny's desire in
deterioration's defective disfigurement


© 2014 Frieda P


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LOL … I on occaison use the 'd in place of ed to allow the verse to sit more symmetrically on the page … I get flack too. People get wound up over odd things. I remain unapologetic. I title haiku too … no brackets even. Yeah … I roll like that:)

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You're just a wild woman peacock Pyrde ;)



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this is so impressively penned.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Patrick, was having some fun with jacob's words about being apostrophised.
LMFAO....I was actually dancing to this one!!! That's hysterical. And that poem....whoohoo...so much alliteration in one place. Ha, thanks for giggles hun! Did I commit any word crimes in this review???Hmmm?? ;-P

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

It is a catchy tune. ;P haha
thanks for the chuckle, Frieda...

nice consonance....

satirically sensible silliness.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

And just think, you were my inspiration. :)
That's one of my favorite Weird Al bits!

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Funny stuff...
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Most of his stuff is hilarious! He has a wonderfully acerbic wit!
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

My favorite kind!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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