Disillusion'd apostrophes

Random silly scribble after chatting with jacob's

Everything's coming up dandelions,

inky destruction of apostrophis'd delusions,

as desecrat'd, disconnect'd decay dilut'd in

dissect'd distraction's dysfunction,

debilitating destiny's desire in

deterioration's defective disfigurement

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

LOL … I on occaison use the 'd in place of ed to allow the verse to sit more symmetrically on the page … I get flack too. People get wound up over odd things. I remain unapologetic. I title haiku too … no brackets even. Yeah … I roll like that:)

[Frieda P]

You're just a wild woman peacock Pyrde ;)

[wordiggerone]

WOW! Sorry because I am more diverted by the fantastic video. Had a good laugh, Thank You, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

'I could care less' that you like the video better lol ;)

[Woody]

the queen of alliteration! this is unbeatable though I feel you've giving me brain cramps.
great song, too. thank you for my first chuckle of the morning F.

[Frieda P]

Brain cramps, my job is done.....!

[Rita L. Sev]

I'll not chide your atrophied apostrophe, but I will exalt your alliteration! :)

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks Teach! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are coming close to taking Jacob's metaphorical master title… he has taught you well.

[Frieda P]

I should be so lucky, thanks so much, this grasshopper need to go wax on, wax off.....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Breath in through mouth out through nose.

[Lyn Anderson]

alright, missy, you know where to hit the apostrophe hunter where it hurts. ummm how about dilut'd just to round it out?

[Frieda P]

Dang, nabb'd again! haha Did you read Ana Sophia's comment, it's priceless....

[kublakhan27]

Well, I knew where this was going right away haha...I'll say it again though, you are profound even on your silliest day...how many people can write six lines of total alliteration - based on one letter, no less - and produce something truly thought-provoking? You're the only one I know of who can do it...keep on 'scribbling' Mrs.R, and trying to convince yourself that it isn't brilliant ;) xo

[Frieda P]

I swear I don't pay you enough Benji. ;) The check is in the mail, or cheque if you prefer....mwah! xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha If I can make you happy with my responses, that's more than enough love, mwah! xo

[Rene Salinas]

Never been too show possession and to show where characters have been omitted, and to show the plural of some expressions been this entertaining before and just for that moment of creativity alone one should bethankful for this offering. But as it is me the journey from distraction to dellusions to destiny and disfigurment makes it even more of an enchanting journey.

Please people mind your p’s and q’s.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

Ha so jazz'd you were enchanted by my scribbles...cute with the p's and q's...thanks Rene

[s y e]

That's like a freaking tongue twister, OMG. Try saying it fast like 10 times and you'll be like, asdfghjkl -- say whaaaa? Hahaha, as for the song, I am showing that to my English Teacher, she'll love me forever, hahaha!!! Kidding. This is amazing... Made me laugh hysterically.

xoxox

[Frieda P]

Ha that's one one to get the kids attention, it's probably more fun to learn if you can dance to it. ;) Thanks sweet noodlebumble. xo

[Matching Socks]

Lol. :)
I imagine KL will appreciate this one too.

[Frieda P]

I was waiting for the editing police to see this one. :) Thanks muchly.

[Matching Socks]

She'll be along soon.
I believe poetry about punctuation is like light erotica for her. :)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha I hope she spots that gem! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

You pointed me to that comment on purpose. There will be a poem. On phone tho so I will post later

[Matching Socks]

LOL. Can't wait. :)