BUTTER (10 W)

BUTTER (10 W)

A Poem by Frieda P


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P
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And as it did not cut through the experience remained superficial and did not make an long lasting imprint. Ugh thought the whole skimming the surface allusion plus the fat. Aint! No one go on saying that you can skim fait from Frieda! I am certainly not saying it.

Like butter woudn't melt.

Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Give that man a prize!!



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That is an awesome metaphorical analogy… some people try to take your heart by force instead f cradling it with kindness.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Ahhh yes nothing like a poem with many meanings.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Could go either way, a lot like love, don't ya think?
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Me think? That hurts the brain too much.
cool :D i like the sarcasm in that... and fits on many I know. awesome

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

So it does, unfortunately, thanks Zahra :)
That only works if the heart is already melted:) Love the irony:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde Peacock. :)
You know I liked this one when you sent it to me in an email yesterday... I so hope that my ex reads this, hahaha!! Let's say it is aimed at all the a*****e out there.... :X

Loved it! xoxo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Indeed it is, and no sharing with that one. :) xo
s y e

10 Years Ago

Oh but Mama.......... PWEASE!!!!!!xo
Clever and delightful. Just ten skilled words is all it took to get the message across loud and clear.


Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Beccy.
The fool. He should have used a torch to set it on fire, melt it!
Do love the song choice. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Shoulda, woulda, coulda. ;) Thanks Ana Sophia, enjoy your Monday!
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Hindsight is 20/20. :)
You too!!
Well some people never get tired of having butter spread over them with a butter knife, lol.

Very interesting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I love when people say 'interesting' I know what that means lol....and I like your interpretation to.. read more
Hmm you trying to make me use my brain chica you know how I hate to Lol.A very thought provoking 10 words I must say.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Just once in a while pazzo. ;)
Man, Frieda this is your forte'.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Most people would prefer I stop at 10 words ;) haha
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

No way, I am just saying, the short quip is wickedly smart.:)
And as it did not cut through the experience remained superficial and did not make an long lasting imprint. Ugh thought the whole skimming the surface allusion plus the fat. Aint! No one go on saying that you can skim fait from Frieda! I am certainly not saying it.

Like butter woudn't melt.

Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Give that man a prize!!

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