Breaking bread's communion...

just a thought in a scribble

I dreamt a captive dream,

    of spaces 'tween the rain

where sinner's pain was lifted in

  deliverance of acceptance's intoxication

         &

 wine was merely

    'in vino veritas',

 sans holy water's baptism

     a world created within integrity

         of each and everyone's beliefs 

            blessed in compassion's kindness,

                simplicity of moment's 

                   in breaking bread's communion   

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I've said it countless times before love, and will say it every time you attempt to qualify something as a 'scribble'...you are incapable of scribbles...I'm not sure how many times I can reword these sentiments, but every time you pick up a pen, magic ensues...it's just in you, and it happens whether you are conscious of it or not...and you know it would take me days to write something this profound...I can write about myself in a night and produce something quasi-decent, but to compose these kinds of observations is quite possibly beyond my abilities...and don't roll your eyes till you stop to consider how many of these types of things you see from me ;)

I dreamt a captive dream,
of spaces 'tween the rain...you had me sighing from the start with those lines...yes, we may be dreamers, but we're not the only ones, we're just not all as amazing a poet as you are :) xo

[Frieda P]

OMG you have me choked up Steve, you've left me speechless and humbled my dearest friend. xo

[kublakhan27]

You know I always speak from the heart Frieda...I don't do idle flattery :) I'm happy that my sentiments moved you as they did....xo

[Bright Ocean Star]

absolutely beautiful, Frieda. You amaze me. You humble me. I love this one, as I love everything you write. Be blessed!

[MomzillaNC]

Profound hope for peace and understanding beyond dogma

[Cassie]

Hey Frieda, been long since I read you, you know I love your pen and this is absolutely loved by me. Hugs to you my friend

[Matching Socks]

Incredibly touching and I echo every word my buddy Steve said, because he says it better.
Very moving, love your scribbles and dreams. Great piece.