Breaking bread's communion...

just a thought in a scribble

I dreamt a captive dream,

    of spaces 'tween the rain

where sinner's pain was lifted in

  deliverance of acceptance's intoxication

         &

 wine was merely

    'in vino veritas',

 sans holy water's baptism

     a world created within integrity

         of each and everyone's beliefs 

            blessed in compassion's kindness,

                simplicity of moment's 

                   in breaking bread's communion   

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I've said it countless times before love, and will say it every time you attempt to qualify something as a 'scribble'...you are incapable of scribbles...I'm not sure how many times I can reword these sentiments, but every time you pick up a pen, magic ensues...it's just in you, and it happens whether you are conscious of it or not...and you know it would take me days to write something this profound...I can write about myself in a night and produce something quasi-decent, but to compose these kinds of observations is quite possibly beyond my abilities...and don't roll your eyes till you stop to consider how many of these types of things you see from me ;)

I dreamt a captive dream,
of spaces 'tween the rain...you had me sighing from the start with those lines...yes, we may be dreamers, but we're not the only ones, we're just not all as amazing a poet as you are :) xo

[Frieda P]

OMG you have me choked up Steve, you've left me speechless and humbled my dearest friend. xo

[kublakhan27]

You know I always speak from the heart Frieda...I don't do idle flattery :) I'm happy that my sentiments moved you as they did....xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

...........................and in love's devotion!

[Ashira Macy]

And what a dream that must have been. That sounds like paradise. Must be what heaven is like, if there is indeed a heaven that we ascend to when we are no longer on this plain. Acceptance of everyone and their beliefs would truly be a thing to behold. If everyone had this same philosophy their would be so much less strife and hatred in the world. Really lovely sentiment my dear friend.

[Patricia]

Breathtaking Frieda! You out did yourself here! So much beauty and peace in one small poem. An angle was guiding your pen with this one....this really touched me and brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing. :)))......

[NoelHC]

So few words, so much to think of in this. I enjoyed the flow and the images.

[Rita L. Sev]

a world created within integrity
of each and everyone's beliefs
blessed in compassion's kindness...

Amen.

[TL Boehm]

the intoxication of acceptance. That's profound.

[Woody]

I can never find words to better the other reviewers.

how's that for a review?

[wordman]

it sounds like a special place to be and loved the music

[s y e]

// I dreamt a captive dream,
of spaces 'tween the rain
where sinner's pain was lifted in
deliverance of acceptance's intoxication //

Well, wow, Mama F... What can I say that I have not said before. Each time I read you, it's like I am lifted to somewhere safe where no one can harm me and I honestly never want to leave. You write with such eloquence no matter the topic, you've rendered me speechless once again. This is out of this world.

Flip flops & all that jazz!xoxo

[Avinash]

Lets proclaim you the queen of such world...please offer me some influential post with good paycheck :)