Bite Me

tongue in cheek sort of...there's a theory that the soul weighs 21 grams as concluded in tests done by Dr. MacDougall in 1901

Bite me

    like you mean it    

       don't beat

         around the bush,

  you want a a piece of this

     better get a grip &

            dig in deeper

  played this game repeatedly,

     I know the rules

             there ain't no lines 

                that can't be crossed,

killed my spirit a while back

  not gonna be an encore,

     before I'm 21 grams down again,

                  you'll be eating realities' dust 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Well, now you're talking Mrs.R ;) Of course the first thing that hit me was the bawdy (no pun intended!) connotations, but the deeper I got into it, the darker it got, till I was in pitch-blackness by the end...there is a lot of despair in this piece, and it's a different kind of delivery from you...this has very much an urban feel to it, but yes, it's still Frieda...I know of no other who could work the '21 grams' motif to such vivid effect...you have again proven your boundless diversity, and your lovely taste in music ;) Incredible stuff my dear...always incredible stuff...xo

[Frieda P]

Make up your mind Benji :) You know I look forward to your reviews, made my night, thanks sweetie :) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha You know that's not my strong suit Mrs.R...I'm always happy when I can make your night though :) xo

[Frieda P]

Woo featured review, this music makes me wanna dance anyway, but now I'm doing the happy dance. :)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Always an occasion that calls for a happy dance ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Okay, is it weird that I find this one sexy too? Sheesh, people are going to start talking ---great write and I love the sassy, sexy tone.

[Frieda P]

That's cuz you like a challenge KL...ha bite me! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

ooh, don't tempt me.

[Frieda P]

Now you're just teasing moi!

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh my Gosh, don't bite me, but I just noticed realities' should be reality's -- unless there are multiple realities, which is possible ...

[Frieda P]

There are ALWAYS multiple realities, you know that girlfriend....

[Lyn Anderson]

okay Sybil, I thought your name was Al :)

[Frieda P]

Ha funny shyte, Sybil is my middle name. ;)

[Ivory]

I love the confident in your words. Great write Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ivory.

[Linda alexander]

Well expression, clear message, well done

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Linda.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now this is a poem I can sink my teeth into… it is like they say action not words… I got the song Buttons from The Pussycat Dolls in mind after reading this.

[Frieda P]

Ha you would say that cowboy, thanks.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I would, either wise I wouldn't be me :)

[redflutterby]

Well now....a biting piece of poetry and a big bite of Great White. Now youre singing my kind of tune!! Yep once bitten twice shy and momma didn't raise no dummy!! Go on with your bad self...ha!!!

[Frieda P]

Ha love the review, my bad self was on a roll! ;)

[Rene Salinas]

Great track! This writing makes me think it would be great to go out partying with Frieda. It seems at times that her efervence wants to get ahead of herself. Bite me and don't beat around the bush is the gaze of someone that has observe many things many times so instead of telling stories which the male species has made an art of just give it to me staight, uncompromising even. Oh my the 21 grms brings back memroies of my eye twitching involuntarily and talking to people that I knew no names and.... .

Irrespectivey of your age Frieda I think you will forever be a young soul.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

I'd love to hear that 21 grams story....I don't know Rene, the head thinks so but the mirror says otherwise these days.

[ron]

Take a bite out of what ever or who ever you need to Frieda. If that's what you need to do to start your day go for it :)

[Frieda P]

Yep, only way to start the day ron. :)

[ron]

Lol...remind me to my distance if I ever have morning coffee with you...lol

[TL Boehm]

a poetic pox on the naysayers this morning. Love the titanium spine presented in this. Good stuff!

[Frieda P]

You got it in one, you read 'tween the lines so well!

[Bill O. Writes]

I love the aggression in this. Very strong feel to it as well. Stand tall sista!

[Frieda P]

Was having o'bite of fun, had grits for breakfast, can you tell? ;) Thanks Bill!

[Bill O. Writes]

Haha I can tell ;)