~quintessence of my heart's surrender

Shoop Shoop

 I breathe your burning essence,

     blinded in sight's enchantment

      of moon's propositioning the sun

a percolating brew of beckoning temptation,

  awakens the head spinning senses of delirium

could sell a tender soul in random abstract yearnings,

 frenzied winds of fiery  lit crystal clear pools of clarity  

   & wildflower meadows of nature's instinctual remedy

rendering me speechless in awe filled consumption

  of abundant smoky, salty tears reverence

         lavished in a symphony of elation's rush

   rising simultaneous as paroxysm's embraces

           lulling me onto weak knee's breathlessness

    exhaling in synergistic consummation's exultation

                     quintessence of my heart's surrender

                                                                   

Author's Note

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

OMG!! ... I'm so in love with this... it's the way you surrender!.... it's heartbreaking, all consuming, and piercing all at the same time... it hurts to love but soooo worth it to give your heart...

...and Robin Thicke is heartachingly beautiful...(his voice too) ;)

Mesmerizing work of art, Friedalicious!!~xoxo~

[AYVID N]

" frenzied winds of fiery lit crystal clear pools of clarity
& wildflower meadows of nature's instinctual remedy
rendering me speechless in awe filled consumption
of abundant smoky, salty tears reverence"

...Such breathtaking lines Frieda...Such an enchantingly beautiful expression of love...

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much dear Divya, your reviews always bring a sweet smile to my poetic heart. xo

[Lucid Dreamer]

Forget the flowers and scenery being breath taking, this poem is the real thief. I truly enjoyed this write!!

[Frieda P]

Sweet review, thanks LD.

[Tate Morgan]

Hi dear such a loving soul laughter and tears pour through your years.
Love ya
Tate

[Frieda P]

One can hope, thanks so much Tate.

[Ohhhwillow]

I LOVE LOVE LOVE the line 'a percolating brew of beckoning temptation' Frieda, it is the collaboration of subtlety and strength in your words that hands us a paintbrush and allows us to outline your tender story with our own tips.

The alliteration in your 'clear pools of clarity' may accentuate your ability to overcome the multivariate feelings that are dragging salty tears down your cheeks.. And though I am otherwise unaware of the exact state of your heart, the compact space in which you compress such rich, flavoursome language tell me that you may be unsure too..

Anyway, this is the creative flow that really gets me going Frieda! When in doubt, be proud of your writing abilities, and keep facilitating them to clear your awesome head.

All my love

[Frieda P]

Wow, you humble me with your words Willow, thanks so much! x

[InsanityWriter]

Breathtaking imagery—absolutely beautiful, Frieda... As always. ;)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Insanity. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i want it to be me!!!!! ;)

just beautiful Frieda .. just beautiful! ... the healing longed for budding .. you do it with every single line .. you always do .. so enjoyed this .. thanks for sharing
E.

[Frieda P]

Who says it's not? ;) Thanks sweet E! x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

being able to give in to the passion again...after so long....

a reawakening...a prescription for rebirth of the spirit of love.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much jacob.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love your expression of complete surrender, Frieda...the connotations are boundless!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Kelly, jazz'd you enjoyed!

[Avinash]

To tap the impulses with words, nobody else can do with such beauty and style... felt like visiting the garden underneath which rivers flow :)

[Frieda P]

Very poetic Avinash, thanks so much. :)

[wordman]

after I went to the dictionary I figured out it was all about love and yearning lol
I loved it

[Frieda P]

Ha did you look up Shoop Shoop Ron? Thanks muchly...

[wordman]

no I knew that one it came from jersey

[Frieda P]

Ha I see you have your smartypants on....

[wordman]

I remember sha na na bouzer