~quintessence of my heart's surrender

Shoop Shoop

 I breathe your burning essence,

     blinded in sight's enchantment

      of moon's propositioning the sun

a percolating brew of beckoning temptation,

  awakens the head spinning senses of delirium

could sell a tender soul in random abstract yearnings,

 frenzied winds of fiery  lit crystal clear pools of clarity  

   & wildflower meadows of nature's instinctual remedy

rendering me speechless in awe filled consumption

  of abundant smoky, salty tears reverence

         lavished in a symphony of elation's rush

   rising simultaneous as paroxysm's embraces

           lulling me onto weak knee's breathlessness

    exhaling in synergistic consummation's exultation

                     quintessence of my heart's surrender

                                                                   

Author's Note

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

OMG!! ... I'm so in love with this... it's the way you surrender!.... it's heartbreaking, all consuming, and piercing all at the same time... it hurts to love but soooo worth it to give your heart...

...and Robin Thicke is heartachingly beautiful...(his voice too) ;)

Mesmerizing work of art, Friedalicious!!~xoxo~

[Bright Ocean Star]

Frieda, do you choose the song and then write the poem that comes to you after? Your poetry is perfect for this one, my friend. You amaze me. Thanks again.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A deeply meaningful piece of writing.
Really loved this poem.

[Ashira Macy]

frenzied winds of fiery lit crystal clear pools of clarity

Favorite line. Sometimes it is hard to let oneself surrender, but in this you make it sound so appealing and take away the usual fear of bearing your weaker side in front of someone. Absolutely stunning dear.

[NoelHC]

Another paean to love, beautifully expressed. Who needs a Word of the Day app when Freida sends you requests.
Well done ma'am.

[Zakari Schmidt]

I really think your word usage is some of the best I've read in a while, definitely up in my favorites. I think it's great, the flow is amazing. I find myself inspired

[KAREN]

You have a way with words. I love the flow and the imagery! Stunning!

[David Scott]

I think this poem is the literary equivalent of dancing naked I the cool light of a bright moonlight night.
There is a sense of vulnerability and freedom here.
I felt the plunge into the clear waters of expression distorted by the ripples of desire.
Refreshing read!

[Frieda P]

*Smiling* here, best compliment a poem could get, dancing naked, just my cuppa tea haha ;) You're too cute Scott...grazie mille!

[David Scott]

I am cute... Ha.
Glad you noticed.
Do you like the dimples? ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

To be lost like the below lines.
"Lavished in a symphony of elation's rush
rising simultaneous as paroxysm's embraces
lulling me onto weak knee's breathlessness"
If we knew the emotion of the symphony of a untamed love. We have find paradise. No weakness in the outstanding poetry dear Frieda.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words Coyote, untamed love and paradise, sounds good to me....

[Boranus]

I see with most of your poetry, it's about words. I feel you rely too much on your words and are too particular with them. At times, I'm lost in the words, lulled by sirens. So much that, I have no idea what you are writing about and come out of the poem, like a maze, glad that I made it out alive. It sounds nice but I don't know, for me, I got nothing out of it. It's well written, but I couldn't feel what you felt, because the words got in the way, for me.

[Frieda P]

I do adore my words, you're making it much more complicated than it is, sorry if you didn't
get the 'feel' of my sentiments, but you'd have made it out alive either way, no one's keeping you captive....

You're never going to let me live down my review are you? Payback's a b***h ha shoop shoop
Hey, you were brutal what can I say, to each his own, you can't win em all... ;)