Crickets (10 W)

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

"Crickets" -- never heard it quite described that way. Yes, the unfaithful is tough -- but it's the why's and who's that haunt us --"what is it about me that made you lie to me?" There are a few kinds of unfaithful. One of them is just stupid -- "I love you but I want a change and I am too chicken to tell you, or I love someone else but I am too chicken to tell you are the worst." I hate crickets.

[Frieda P]

You know the 'dead' in the eyes, I think honesty is the best policy, but no one dares go there, it's easier to be deceptive and get your yaya's off with two I guess...see how long you can get away with it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very clever Moonbeam and a very creative metaphor. I can hear the chirping now.

[NoelHC]

Hmmm, I may have to think about doing 10 word poems, that would suit my attention... Ooooo look, a squirrel....
Well written, and captures the current internet meme of "crickets" anytime the usual response is silence so well.

[Frieda P]

Ha ha shiny stuff! Thanks so much Noel...

[NoelHC]

Shiny stuff? Oooooo, where?

[Frieda P]

Put that one in 10 words... :)

[NoelHC]

Uhh, put what in 10 words? ; )

[Frieda P]

You're too funny hunny. :)

[Rene Salinas]

Unfaithfullness touch wood, not something I have met first hand so anything that I could have been about to say will be rubbish. My Dad at least told my Mom that he had enough before things went downhill and until this day he remains my Mom's best friend. Unfaithfullness would have ruined the freinship as well as everything else that happened before that. Very difficult moment.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

You're lucky, and your dad at least had the common decency to do so...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh this is so brutal my Lady!

[Frieda P]

OH seriously, and the lying stuffed shirt isn't?!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Brutal misrepresentation I fear.

[Frieda P]

You woke on the irritating side of the bed today I see...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am just going to call my analyst!

[Frieda P]

Even she can't help you....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No it's a man as a woman cannot be trusted with my inner child! lol

[Frieda P]

Oh brother, you're asking for it.....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Really?......................................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And I aint your brother!

[stars are far]

wow, the song was os beautiful it toched me , and the lines were very nice, creative,,

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much star, I like the challenge of these 10 word poems.

[stars are far]

it shows the creatiity you can do .