Biblical farce

Tried to drink your sentiments out of my bed

   still I long'd for you in my thought-laden head,

      chanted in braille verse to my vowed resolution

            written on empty coffee foam's contention

                  in conflict's diversion of indifference,

hostility's warnings pen'd on the dotted line,

   pulled the trigger in Russian roulette's toying mind

      wedded bliss but a myth of yesterday's yearning,

   you were never there, now spare me

                         the empty poetic promises,

dissed in disillusioned, dissolution, distributional destiny

    manifestations of a higher power demoralized,

 dematerialized in human emotion's obsolete conjecture

            'let no man put asunder', a biblical farce...

                                                'So what?'

Author's Note

captcha - reaward

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

There is feisty involved on this, better not cross the path of this feeling. Lingering male issues from the past unresolved although apperently in retrospection he wasn't even there to begin with. All empty promised and make believe then. Isn't it a wonder that you would feel that level of frustration? To turn the page and create a new space , For the next maybe? Maybe not but what is clear is this time there will be no pulling apart.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

My muse was feeling all feisty, not where this one started out, but landed with a big thump, thanks Rene.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Whoa, thee of little faith. A brusing and fiesty write full of sceptiscism and brittle, bludgeoning hard hitting lines my Lady.

[Frieda P]

C'mon really, don't make me go there John................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

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[Frieda P]

That's what I thought, four times to myself. ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

See what thought did my Lady!

[Frieda P]

You're gonna get in trouble dear....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am always in trouble my Lady. You Joisey gals! Sheeeesh!