Casanova's just desserts ~ COLLABORATION APRIL & FRIEDA

there was no actual carnage in the making of this poem, we wrote to the enticing graphic_Ben Newman Art

She languished in licking the nectar

            from her succulent lips

cherry wine still bleeding,

           poetically onto her dainty hankie

fleshy nourishment still clung

                  to her every whim

she dabbled some more where

          his lying guts had been forsaken

a severed treat with peach preserves

                  lavished on a silver platter

         of half baked intentions

                   and sticky betrayal's emotions

   still pulsating with promises

                 as useless as his manipulations

crooked Casanova caught this pretty kitty’s claws

      retracted in slippery satisfaction,

                 dripping with delight

    deliciously steaming from his just desserts

the cherry of his eye now so appetizing

       beefy treat he bragged on and on

went down in one gulp's demise

      sans blood sweat & tears at the table

one lump or two with that sassy tongue

        hardly matters when its been twice bitten

wicked woman indulging as justice is served,

    washed it all down with a nice vintage chianti

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Hey girls"! You really make a deadly pair... a poem again from the divine combo... well this forces me to lick the nectar off!!.. lol the picture here is dripping with red wine of temptation... i guess every man here is gonna ogle that pic first and review the poem last.. hah!! You both have really vividly described the image. Two style merged together- i liked this amalgation. Girls gimme warning next time you have something burning in your page ★winks★

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

We were channeling our Bobbitt connection. :) Thanks Sophy, jazz'd you enjoyed out twisted romp.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I loved this twist.. pleasure as always :)

[AprilRN1210]

thank you girl, glad you enjoyed it...

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Wicked, wicked girls...what cannibals! And what deliciously messy images you paint. If ya gotta die...what a way to go. Very nicely done.

[AprilRN1210]

thank you.. tickled you enjoyed this sassy treat... so much FUN when her and I get together!!! :)

[BL]

Your words and thoughts are devouringly good and the two of you combine so well to illustrate the power of just one woman! It's when they hunt in packs that it gets really scary, on nights out for example.

It's always a good idea to have a glass of wine handy to take the taste of man away.

[AprilRN1210]

Hey Blue!!! that wine does come in handy... two can be just as deadly as a pack:)

[BL]

Sounds enticing!

[Sunya]

You gals scare me now..read two poems back to back and both were anti-guys haha well not anti guys but the last one was anti pervs..
Half baked intentions; slippery satisfaction; twice bitten
brilliantly written :)
-Sunya

[Frieda P]

Our bark is worse than our bite, most times anyway ha.... we had fun doing this, jazz'd you enjoyed! :)

[AprilRN1210]

hey you!!! Thank you... glad you enjoyed this one.. figured you would with "Hannibal" and all.. was fun for sure.. and my rant felt just as good.. :D

[Sunya]

Yea i did actually visualize it..it was more of a bite than a bark :p haha yea but some bites are enjoyable.. though its a war going on out there, both sides can appreciate a rocket launcher for air strike cuz weapons are used by both ;)

[Frieda P]

I'm not touching 'rocket launcher', not one word. :)

[AprilRN1210]

haha... awwww. chicken rubbing off on you girl?....

[AprilRN1210]

all is fair in love and war:P

[Sunya]

well there is a war between the sexes with banners of feminism soooo a rocket launcher being a destructive weapon which can also be used as anti aircraft gun (cuz surely you girls writing poem is like having air superiority) would be appreciated by both sides in the war..cuz even a Casanova would (maybe just maybe) write something to counter your air superiority :D

[AprilRN1210]

I wish them luck in that endeavor and would love to see that attempt... :P

[Sunya]

hahaha its not gonna be an endeavor :p a piece of cake lol now all i need is someone with an anti-aircraft skills :p

[AprilRN1210]

if you say so... piece of cake?... ha... suuuuure... good luck, again I say... :P

[Lauriegirl]

Very good. this is interesting and quite enchanting..good job

[Frieda P]

I doubt the men were enchanted, thanks so much Laurie.

[AprilRN1210]

haha... Have to agree with Frieda on this one... thank you Laurie, glad you enjoyed:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow! This is quite the extreme punishment for infidelity. And gruesomely delicious. :) And you already know I dig the song.:)

[Frieda P]

Ya think so really? haha ;)

[AprilRN1210]

thank you ma'am...

[Matching Socks]

Men, look out!
They say revenge is a dish best served with chianti apparently.
Seriously... You guys are killer pair when you write. :)

[Frieda P]

Best served very chilled yep. ;) Thanks Ana Sophia!

[Matching Socks]

Good collab from a couple of my faves. :)

[Frieda P]

We had a lot of fun writing this one, apparently April is as twisted as moi. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Agreed!............

[John Alexander McFadyen]

agreed!...........

[Matching Socks]

Twisted Sisters. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Definately!

[Frieda P]

Ha I love twisted sisters....who asked you JOHN?! haha

[Matching Socks]

Lol! :) I think it's a common known fact.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh I just sort of happened by the party!

[Frieda P]

The party is in your honor lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If only!................

[Frieda P]

Aren't those your shoes?..............

[John Alexander McFadyen]

What the ones under your bed?

[Matching Socks]

I'd run if I were you John... You've seen what happens to men at this party.

[Frieda P]

In your wildest dreams babe.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

True Ana, I have my spikes in my ruck sack!

[AprilRN1210]

I see we had the party without me... but as always thanks girl... me twisted? lol

[Matching Socks]

April, you guys are the best kind of twisted. :)

[AprilRN1210]

haha... I guess.. according to Frieda, I am the Evil Twin..lol jeeeez... now I can add "twisted" to it... lol
Frieda made me do it!!! I am innocent this time!!!

[Matching Socks]

You're both evil. :)
That's ok though, I provide good balance. :P
I'm a good little angel. :D

[Frieda P]

AS IF I had to twist your arm!!!

[Frieda P]

Oh jeez, did you type that one with a straight face Ana Sophia??? ;P

[Matching Socks]

Nope, not at all. :)

[AprilRN1210]

LMAO... no, no "twisting" of my arm... I jumped in wholeheartedly, of course... just sayin... lolread moreLMAO... no, no "twisting" of my arm... I jumped in wholeheartedly, of course... just sayin... lol
and I know she didn't... good little angel?... ha... you are a member of the twisted sisters for real snarky spice... :P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok gals a trio (or is that a threesome?) is a rather unfair advantage me thinks.

[Matching Socks]

For you it'd be a dreamsome John,

[AprilRN1210]

I know right!!! eat your own heart out.... :P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I have my eyes closed, does that mean I qualify?

[Ashira Macy]

My goodness you ladies are dangerous. Remind me not to make you mad...

Never has cannibalism been described in such beautiful terms. It was disgusting and still had that seductress flare to it. I suppose he did have it coming, and I love the jab you made about him being small enough to swallow in one gulp. Guess someone got too cocky and lost his privilege huh?

[Frieda P]

Glad you picked up on that one Ashira ;) Girls just wanna have fun.....thanks so much!

[AprilRN1210]

haha.. you would pick up on that wouldn't you girl... thank you ma'am... glad you enjoyed.. :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

I have a feeling this one was more fun to write than the chained angel kept from flying in the stars. You two are dangerous together! Brilliant, but distinctly dangerous...Well done, little kitties!

[Frieda P]

RAWR...we wanted it to make a statement. ;) Thanks Star!

[AprilRN1210]

thank you so much, glad you enjoyed:)

[R Smith]

Hello Hannibal, Frieda, April Lecter, now I know why your collaborations always scare me to death, Casanova gets eaten by The Witches of Eastwick, i.e. you two, delightful from start to finish, glass of Chianti anyone.

[Frieda P]

Cheers Richard, this was too much fun.....

[AprilRN1210]

hey you!! glad you enjoyed.. cheers:)

[R Smith]

your welcome April just don't invite me round for dinner till I see who's on the menu.

[AprilRN1210]

haha.... oh come now Richie... afraid?... nah... don't strike me as the type... nope..

[Frieda P]

Ha I think those were Daryl Van Horne's last words too...behave Richard, or we'll put a spell on you...

[AprilRN1210]

Lol.... indeed... morning ma'am... (hugs) and squishy kisses :)

[R Smith]

just cook me a little then, medium rare maybe, as for the spell, make me a world famous writer please!!!

[Frieda P]

Haha April and I are casting that spell on each other, we might launch you and your spaceship to Pluto in an alternate universe. :)

[AprilRN1210]

LMAO... he is already in his "own world"... he doesn't need our help there.. lol
pretty full still... but will keep that in mind, Richie...

[R Smith]

Roast me April, ROAST ME!!!!!

[Einstein Noodle]

cmon! you guys aren't all that!!! ???????????????????? are you?
"she dabbled some more where
his lying guts had been forsaken" ..... ieeyiyiyiyiyiyieeee! am i in Bobbitt's bordello ..please tell me no!!! no .. tell me yes Yes YEs YES!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
pass a little nip of frontal lobe if you please .. arrgh! you two are no silent lambs ... sheesh!
i am scared ... i am very scared now!
sign me anonymous please ..

[Frieda P]

Laughing hysterically here.....be afraid, be very afraid! :)

[AprilRN1210]

awwwww, E... scared?... I don't see that happening... nope... but made me giggle.. thanks sir:)