Coffee and poetry. My two favorite things. Amazing description my friend.
"an iambic foot of rhythm's hypnotic control
wandering in poesy's contentment
satisfying the restless gypsy's urges,"
Nice to know the feeling the contentment of pen and paper with the good taste of coffee near. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
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Two of my favorites also, thrilled you enjoyed the gypsy urges Coyote, thanks so much.
Beautifully written and refreshing to read; leaving a pleasant after-taste for the tongue and mind. Wonderful atmosphere you've created, thank you for sharing.
Well if this isn't a match made in heaven, I don't know what is, and I ADORE that artwork! I don't write a whole lot of stuff without a cup of coffee next to me...it's like I need the wafting aroma to arouse my creative attentiveness...as always, you make it difficult to single out certain bits for every line is loaded with majestic evocations...the iambic foot of rhythm's hypnotic control is perfect though...that's one of my favourite single lines from your work without question...I tend to focus on meter more than you do, but it takes someone of your talent to express it that way...I wish I thought of that one ;) This poem took me to a peaceful and contented place, which is saying something given the mood I've been in today haha But you can do that Mrs.R, as you've proven time and time again...gorgeous work :) xo
This instantly put me in a good mood... I love, love, LOVE coffee!...
and you just made coffee even more delightful with your poetic enchantment of butterflies and lovely music... la de da, la de da.... la la la.... ;D
Gorgeous, sweet serenity!!! LOVELY !~xoxoxoxoxo~
Posted 10 Years Ago
I loved this one Fri! It's so fresh, and innovative, just a bright new day, kind of feeling... I feel the sun shining again... coffee and poetry always seem to work well together, and with your brilliant mind, they just are music. :) This one made me happy today ... lovely work my dear.
I will fully admit to looking up tumult in the dictionary.
If this doesn't sound like a fantastic morning i really don't know what does. The precise doctrine of description that you use for this piece is quite amazing.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..