Dancing _ Ten word poem

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

Frieda!!!!! They say it's the weekend where funky, cherry eating dancing abounds .. they're wrong, it's a Monday morning setting that tone for the whole damn week .. WOW!! SHAZZZZZAMMM THANK YOU MA'AM!! If i didn't know better i think you are teasing me with a big cherry, funk-a-delic smile and in 10 words too ALI KAZZZZAAAAM! just saying ... you know of course that song will be playing and singing and..in this white boy's mind all week long ... I'm awake now Frieda .. MWAH xxoo

[Frieda P]

Jayus, if I knew I was gonna get that reaction, I would have delved into this ten word thing sooner!! ha...jazz'd you're groovin' white boy! Play that funky music Curt. Hope you're dancin' 'til you die. ;) Mwah! xo

[redzone]

You can get caught up in the music embedded in your poem. But really it's the poem, the loveliness of it, the feel that you can get swirl by it, and this with 10 words. May be silly to say, but the music and even picture don't capture all that is said with these few words. Poetry is indeed a force that can entice romantic rapture (using your word ) .... do you believe it is possible to fall in love with someone through their poetry??? That is an exciting idea i think ..

[s y e]

This is my ultimate favourite song ever, you have me smiling ( a much needed smile... ) so thank you for that and the little ditty is sweet. You'll have the whole cafe smiling. xoxo

[Frieda P]

This music has to get your motor revving. ;) Hope you're dancing noodelebumble mwah! xo

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to dance to the words of poetry. You did very well using the 10 words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote, it's a fun challenge...

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well. You are welcome.