Sweetest sanctum ~

The reasoning in safely closing my eyes at day's end

          embracing the kiss of morn in the awe of dawn,

the sanctuary that keeps me grounded

   where beauty grows 'tween the cracks of darkness

             & logic and senses discern life's poetry, 

          sacred haven of every desired whim & thought

a port when life gets stormy, pure beacon of light,

     breathing in symbiotic perfection of salty sea sprays

 sanctum of escaped prayers answered inkind, 

     lifting me to a higher power's spiritual holy place

    impervious refuge when the world seethes perpetual fire,

relinquishing all turbulent fears and doubts

     rescue in release's invulnerable intentions, 

        unfurling in this retreat of sweet absolution's surrender 

Author's Note

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

Breathtakingly beautiful piece girl... the music is so powerful and moving.. the words are like lyrical honey... sweet and satisfying... The flow and melody of ideas just lift the soul higher and higher towards that sanctuary... we all need that "port in the storm" to escape to when times get rough... The peace of mind to close our eyes and drift to a place where the worries and pains disappear for a moment... a place where those desires and whims can thrive between the cracks of life's darkness... where survival isn't on the menu--LIVING is.... a place of bliss and spiritual soothing.. where it feels as if our prayers have been answered and we are for one small moment not afraid, not hurting, not doubting, not hiding in the dark... the light shines brightly and the soul thrives in the warmth... a place where you don't feel weighed down with the worries of the world... writing can be such a place... dreams another... I escape off into my music and my head.... but whatever that "sanctuary" may be---it is needed.. and should be cherished as the life-saver that it is... can I just say freaking WOW..... this is beyond beautiful... it feels like a spiritual healing... stunning in every way... it tickles my heart with rays of angelic iridescence and welcoming warmth... amazing as always....

[Avinash]

The poem and the music together create an unforgettable ballad. It was a treat for eyes, ears, mind and soul. Keep coming with more :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much my sweet friend, thrilled you enjoyed this one. :)

[Rene Salinas]

What a lovely representation. When I read Friedas's words they seems a combination of painting and caressing she wants to let me know but she doesn't want to cause harm or destroy anything as she touches the objects with words. Here we have a sacred space needed in order to cleanse to take refuge at times to recharge if one must. To seek silence , solace advice oh, a space so important it is intrinsical to our own mental sanity. But that is notall that she shares see after each and every battle a message is left and there seem to be a conversation of a higher nature with a higher entity. Somethings can be rescued then and upheld true to its esence.

It is like dancing with words

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

I'm humbled by your kind words Rene, love 'dancing with words'...your review is utterly poetic.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

The reasoning in safely closing my eyes at day's end

embracing the kiss of morn in the awe of dawn,






where beauty grows 'tween the cracks of darkness

& logic and senses discern life's poetry,

sacred haven of every desired whim & thought

a port when life gets stormy, pure beacon of light,

breathing in symbiotic perfection of salty sea sprays

sanctum of escaped prayers answered inkind,

lifting me to a higher power's spiritual holy place


How lovely and peaceful and the music goes lovely
with the poem you etched down here almost makes me cry.


Still not handling seeing death with so many I hate it
well more so if it is suicide maybe not what you where speaking of
one passing and leaving earth but that's what I feel with the song and
how you wrote this poem and I am in tears.


Thank you for sharing and thank you for your lovely
review and comments you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Frieda P]

I can understand why you'd take it there Benita, we tend to read poetry from our own mind's perspective and I know you've been greatly affected by the loss. Thanks so much for your kind words.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. thank you for sharing helps get the emotions out. yes you're right about how we tend to read poetry from our own mind's perspective. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Sophy Freebirds]

Well dearheart.. i just opened my eyes - and here it os your refreshing poem. I don't think i need coffee anymore.. hah!! But yes i liked the way you described closing of eyes at night when we gather our thoughts then at dawn it brings a new light.No matter if the world is against us. Our words are our solace.Such an encouraging poem sweetie.Glad to know you've found some light. Keep shining.. xxxx

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

Good morning to you then...I'd still have the coffee if I were you, just saying. ;) Thanks, momentary blip of sanity, keeps me semi-normal ya know? xoxo

[Sophy Freebirds]

Lol..yea!! you are a coffee addict.. you are the sanest person i 've ever met.. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Lol..yea!! you are a coffee addict.. you are the sanest person i 've ever met.. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

This feels positive and hopeful, and has a wonderful taste to it.

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed, would you like an after poetry drink to wash it down? :)

[redzone]

Frieda, your poem allows us to think that it might just be possible to reach this "sweetest sanctum" .. I love the idea of "embracing the kiss of morn in the awe of dawn," of being grounded and not just dreaming... .

It's been a day of big swings, from the depths of sadness to the highs of hope and all this found pouring forth from Frieda's pen and heart... I'd say that was a great day... love you Frieda xxoo
~~redzone

[Frieda P]

That's how days go sometimes, that's usually why we write poetry, no? Or maybe I'm just the crazy one, either way, thanks for your sweet words my friend. :) xo MWAH!

[redzone]

Yes, exactly.. and of course you are crazy Frieda, you call me friend after all, that's pretty crazy... besides how can we live in such a fuk'd up world and not be at least a little crazy...

[Frieda P]

You expect me to answer one, I hope it was rhetorical sweetie...

[kublakhan27]

Yes, tomorrow is another day...it isn't always a measure of consolation but it's all we have....I'm shaking off the cobwebs of another early sleep in an attempt to gather my thoughts and offer some insight on another gorgeous piece from your catalogue...more often than not, your poetry is the sanctuary that keeps me grounded Mrs.R...even when your words are no so uplifting as these ones, I still find strength from them, and the motivation to carry on in spite of whatever mood you convey...this is truly a ray of sunshine...I am happy for you as I read this one...I hope you are always able to find the beauty in the cracks of darkness...that's where the light gets in after all...you've brought a smile to my face with this one love...just a gorgeous piece of poetry :) xo

[Frieda P]

Ahh my peace and sweet smile for the night. :) Thrilled you're affected by it dear Steve, I knew you'd love the 'cracks' line....I might have to make you read this every day if it lifts your spirits....just saying ;) Thanks my sweet friend. xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Very true Mrs.R, I may have to carry a copy of this in my wallet and just look at it once in a while...not much more I can say, just a beautiful pristine piece...lovely work my dearest friend :) xo

[Sami Khalil]

There is a reason we embrace your poetry. There is an absolution from oblivion. You reach high powers and descend from mighty towers in humbleness...Excellent...:).................

[Frieda P]

I am truly humbled by your kind words Sami, truly, thanks so much my friend. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).............................

[Baby Ricochet]

Where beauty grows 'tween cracks of darkness. Now THAT'S a poetic line.

[Frieda P]

Why thank you muchly Mark, I take that as a grand compliment coming from you...

[Matching Socks]

This is where I need to be!
Beautiful gem here Frieda. Enhanced beautifully by this music.

[Frieda P]

Me too, I'm still seeking it out, when I find it, I'll let you know. :) Grazie mille!

[Matching Socks]

And send me directions!!

[Frieda P]

Have your flip flops ready, I'll pick you up!

[Matching Socks]

Packed and ready!!!

[redzone]

Did I hear someone mention "road trip with flip flops"?? If it's allowed can I join you?? I'm a guy and as you know guys always need directions to get anywhere besides lost.. thanks for allowing my intrusion, Ana and Frieda ;0)

[Frieda P]

I beg to differ, you guys never ask for directions or get lost according to your male persuasion...but of course you're invited! Bring the booze ;)

[Matching Socks]

Now it's getting interesting... :)

[Frieda P]

You didn't think there wouldn't be spirits in my perfect world, did ya? ;)

[Matching Socks]

Free flowing with no hangovers. :)

[redzone]

No hangovers..oh I'll bring the booze and plenty.. Ha

[redzone]

Taking orders for special booze...

[redzone]

Hmmm Frieda, didn't I just ask for directions?? Last I checked I'm still a guy... but it's your perfect world so you get to rule... :-p

[Frieda P]

Since you were so kind to ask, bring a bottle of Chivas Regal Royal Salute, you might have to sell your soul. ;) but it'll be worth it....haha

[redzone]

Don't have a soul any longer Frieda, used to drink Chivas Regal... and yes well worth it.. who needs a soul anyway HA. ;0)

[Frieda P]

Yes you do Curt, you wouldn't be such a sweetheart or be able to write such brilliant poetry otherwise...