~ a sorta bohemian rush

Guilty in sentiments of sin,

 demanding of

delectations' expectations

as to where the moon

meets ocean's sensations,

& why tree nymphs make forests

envious of the sky,

seeking divinity of color's rhyme

in ravaging warm tides,

whilst crimson's hue and

vast cobalt blue's edgy drink

 sip the gypsy dandelion wine,

smelling the sweet scent 

of rain in my veins

a tango'd elixir writhing 

over frothy seas

wandering tirelessly in

consensual surrender's rush,

visions of sensual dandelions swaying 

wafting to high heaven's

            bourgeois holy grail

fighting wayward lion's

          of  roaring constellations, 

written on ether's haze in

adrenaline  junkies'

eternal  blood & sweat  in

tears of love sonnets cloud riffs,

breathing in spiritual

          stargazer's implosions

of conceptual

 sexual last rites

playing on heartstrings,

foreboding the dread

            of apathy & indifference 

communing in serendipitous

       sighing moments,

blessed in a 

sort  of 

bohemian

 poetic 

madness 

Author's Note

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

This bohemian poetic madness is so much fun... Colorful, pleasant, steamy, well-rounded mix of AWESOMESAUCE.... those tree nymphs do love the beauty of the colorful rhyme but they are drunk on that wine... dancing with the dandelions and in awe of the lioness as she enraptures all that she meets.. her roar seducing the constellations to shine just for her... sighing in content of her breathtaking ramblings that glitter across the page... I love this ma'am.. your creativity and heart shine through in this one and it is STUNNING... going in fav's for sure... also.. can't go wrong with Zeppelin... nope...

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed my insanity April! You know I'm dancing on the ceiling to your review ma'am...nope, never go wrong with Zep...grazie mille sweetie! xo

[AprilRN1210]

you knew I would enjoy this, who wouldn't.. and it shows how "mad" I am that I could relate and understand each maddening word.. lol
it is always a pleasure ma'am...

[Frieda P]

I only sent this one to the crazies who I thought might comprehend my madness, yep, you were on that list. ;) haha

[AprilRN1210]

I will be on any of your "lists" ma'am... sign me UP!.... ok... maybe not the clawed list... lmao.... just sayin.....

[Frieda P]

Oh you don't the right equipment for that list hon, just saying ;) haha

[AprilRN1210]

oh my gawd..... you just made me blush... was not even referring to THAT... was referring to the enemy list.. but oh... yea... lol...... waiting for the cheeks to get back to normal color... damn girl... :P

[Frieda P]

Oh that list, such a silly one to have on a poetry site, but alas, people will be people, rolling my eyes. haha :)

[AprilRN1210]

hey!!! careful they might get stuck :P
pffft... quit laughing at me!!! lol
and that is a silly list in general, but alas people will be people, indeed... I am learning that:(

[Frieda P]

I know, I saw my brain that time, or a reasonable facsimile....

[AprilRN1210]

scary concept.... run!.... lol

[Frieda P]

Very funny hunny!! haha

[AprilRN1210]

I thought so..... made me giggle....:P... lol

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing flow of thoughts. I had to read again. This bohemian poetic was alive and well in the amazing poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ashira Macy]

I found myself lost in this world you described, and not really wanting to return either. Bohemian lifestyle has always been something appealing to me.

whilst crimson's hue and
vast cobalt blue's edgy drink
sip the gypsy dandelion wine,

Dandelion wine sounds absolutely delicious to me for some reason.

[Cory Barrett]

Bohemian indeed. The title led me to one thought before reading the piece, and then you wound up and delivered some thing totally different. Sexy and fun. Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Curious to know what you were thinking originally, thanks Cory.

[Matching Socks]

Vivid images dance upon my eyelids leaving feathery tickles.
Beautiful poem. :)
Or to quote Ape: AWESOMESAUCE

[Frieda P]

Ha love me some awesomesauce, grazie mille Ana Sophia :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I kind of like the word bourgeois, and very neat pairing with holy grail. Digging the funky fun vibe of this piece.

[Frieda P]

It's definitely an interesting word, I rather like Bohemian myself, thank KL.

[Jon Roggie]

I find myself, waiting, merely to give a few words of praise. So, I will listen to the music you provide.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jon.

[just Penny]

So many beautiful images here and you make colors come alive in your words. I like "he sweet scent
of rain in my veins" - that's a sensation I just love. Wonderful writing:) Penny

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Penny, very sad avatar, come back and don't let the asshats get to you! :)

[willweb]

I need a crown to place all of these jewels in. Frieda P. I will need to take a course in poetry reviewing or something - you poetry leaves me without words and most of the time without breath. Wish I could say more, but - I really enjoyed this poem today. It really took my breath away.

[Cryingkate]

You can bporrow one of my Crowns or Tiara

[Lydia Shutter]

Creativity....the blues, reds, verbs, and nouns of it....do a gypsy's dance round the campfire of life in this one, Frieda. So ramble on, Joisey goil....your ramblings are exceptionally enjoyable to read. Lydi**

[R Smith]

the wild and exciting ramblings of a poet at the peak of their creative powers and that dear Frieda is you, a blazing star across the night sky....Fantastic.