~the dark chocolate I want to devour

playfully yummy

Indulge my smoldering senses

   you're like the meringue of my confection,

      the dark chocolate I want to devour

       ice cream drippings of nectar'd desire

don't want to miss a delectable drop

    sweet nibbles a'wash in abundance,

     quenching my ravenous thirst

       strawberries & cream of my cravings,

I languish insatiable in your appetite  

   ever so slowly consuming the

        crush of rhymed satisfaction

                        with a cherry on top

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Good to the last drop Mrs.R? Wow, my sweet tooth is vibrating, at least I think that's my sweet tooth ;) Not even sure how to respond to this one...to use a quote from Alice Cooper that I paraphrased in my song poem, I'm a hungry man but I don't wanna pizza...I'll take it, along with the chocolate and ice cream and all the other delectable stuff you've put into this piece, but only one thing would satiate this appetite...thanks for getting me hot and bothered on the Saturday morning love...now what am I gonna do the rest of the day? Maybe that question should be left rhetorical ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Ha I don't have a clue what you're talking about Benji, it's about special yummy confections. ;) The quote was perfect by the way...yep, we'll leave that one rhetorical for sure! :) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Oh you always know what I'm talking about Mrs.R, that's why my questions are rhetorical ;) xo

[Kenneth The Poet]

Now, I want a Dove Bar. Or the one Rachel Bilson is eating.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kenneth, but I think you meant 'Rachel Bilson' herself... :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

I guess so too.

[Frieda P]

That one was easy to read 'tween the lines.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok I am looking for the metaphoric clues here! Are we in double meaning land or has my Lady really just orgasmed over confectionary?

[Frieda P]

Ha ha John, I'll never tell, then all the mystique is gone. ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I was thinking darker skin my Lady?

[Frieda P]

Geez you're so easily persuaded....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You know me so well my Lady!

[Frieda P]

I know, and you abhor it !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Abhor what exactly my Lady?

[Frieda P]

That I 'know' your inner tickings....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And who wrote those lyrics 'Your love is better than ice cream' ? Must have been a woman at the wrong time of the month. It is a well known fact that women like ice cream better than sex!

[Frieda P]

Oh really, you're hanging out with the wrong lot of women, or doing it wrong hon lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok doc I will lay on the couch....................................

[Frieda P]

Oh good gawd, this is going to take ages............................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yeah but I ain't paying YOUR fees love!

[Frieda P]

So you stay fooked up then...haha

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah such a sweet place..............................................join me for tea?

[Frieda P]

Yes indeed, denial is such a nectar'd niche.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Darling, if it works just eat it!
And if I hear that line 'Your love is better than ice cream' one more time I will rip my own throat out with my teeth!

[Frieda P]

Don't make me sing John, you'll be sorry...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah my head just exploded all over the bedroom! and the neighbours have called 999 (911)!

[Frieda P]

Can't say I blame them or you....

[Lyn Anderson]

Ohhh, yummy, yes, a delectable treat. Not sure a'wash needs an apostrophe, but it's your trademark, so, whatever you wish.:)

[Frieda P]

You know I have to slip one in whenever I can, jazz'd you enjoyed the dark chocolate treat. :)