~the dark chocolate I want to devour

playfully yummy

Indulge my smoldering senses

   you're like the meringue of my confection,

      the dark chocolate I want to devour

       ice cream drippings of nectar'd desire

don't want to miss a delectable drop

    sweet nibbles a'wash in abundance,

     quenching my ravenous thirst

       strawberries & cream of my cravings,

I languish insatiable in your appetite  

   ever so slowly consuming the

        crush of rhymed satisfaction

                        with a cherry on top

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Good to the last drop Mrs.R? Wow, my sweet tooth is vibrating, at least I think that's my sweet tooth ;) Not even sure how to respond to this one...to use a quote from Alice Cooper that I paraphrased in my song poem, I'm a hungry man but I don't wanna pizza...I'll take it, along with the chocolate and ice cream and all the other delectable stuff you've put into this piece, but only one thing would satiate this appetite...thanks for getting me hot and bothered on the Saturday morning love...now what am I gonna do the rest of the day? Maybe that question should be left rhetorical ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Ha I don't have a clue what you're talking about Benji, it's about special yummy confections. ;) The quote was perfect by the way...yep, we'll leave that one rhetorical for sure! :) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Oh you always know what I'm talking about Mrs.R, that's why my questions are rhetorical ;) xo

[Mark]

A great work comparing physical love to the enjoyment of food.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ummmmm.... ahhh ohh.. you màde me damn hungry Freida.. this poem was dripping with sensuality.. you made me want to bite my lips in anticipation.. holy wow Freida.. Ii am now famished to devour.
Killer phrases babes ;)savour it till the last drop ..hah

~Sophy

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ummmmm.... ahhh ohh.. you màde me damn hungry Freida.. this poem was dripping with sensuality.. you made me want to bite my lips in anticipation.. holy wow Freida.. Ii am now famished to devour.
Killer phrases babes ;)

~Sophy

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ummmmm.... ahhh ohh.. you màde me damn hungry Freida.. this poem was dripping with sensuality.. you made me want to bite my lips in anticipation.. holy wow Freida.. Ii am now famished to devour.
Killer phrases babes ;)

~Sophy

[Rene Salinas]

Just stumbled upon this and it is virtually impossible not to salivate and begin to want something to eat. Yet for all the allegories in the world I don't think that this type of desire would be satisfied by the intake of any subtance other than the one that th writing is intented for.

Still though difficult not to feel hungry

[Matching Socks]

This makes my mouth water Frieda. It's delicious. :)

[ron]

Got to love the sweets. And what's better than chocolate...a
Whit a cherry on top for the finish.
Love this sweet poem from a sweet poetess.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I just had chocolate cake....orgasmic....as is this sweet, delectable poem.

[raj24]

this one was delicious...strawberries, cream, chocolate and cherry.. wow..nice one Frieda

Raj

[Trace]

I want a bite of that.

Sounds yummy....

Trace