pressed sentiments 'tween colorless pages ~

 

pressed  sentiments 'tween colorless pages

   of unknown origin's sublimation

requiem for affection's last breath

  ceremoniously done asunder

in dirges of dishonest death marches

  lamenting in disenchanted melancholic blues

threnody's last rhyme of lamentation's burial site

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

I love pressing flowers.. i have done it manuy times. But the flowers gifted by someone special are of great value.. ,"requiem of affections last breath"- yes these phrase wrenced my heart!! We love when they bloom but when the aroma is gone, pressed under the pages they are copses.."in dirges of death's dishonest marches"- gods!! Freida this one really depicts the burial of a relationship.. thank you for sharing such an effective piece.. You really write out of this world ;)

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

You're too kind Sophy, you humble me, doing the happy dance to your review. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

:).. ohh wow.. keep dancing babes...

[Sophy Freebirds]

:).. ohh wow.. keep dancing babes...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This sounds like a difficult good bye....
one that has left a soul torn...

The painful release is inevitable, yet one must move on...

A heartfelt write...powerful.~xoxo~

[Frieda P]

Thanks sweet Robbie, taking a break from sun and fun? So happy to see you, now I'm smiling :) Grazie mille. xoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes.... it's nice to dip into the pool of poetry from time to time...
It's my pleasure.~xoxo~

[Frieda P]

And no visible tan marks. :) xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

nope! ;) xxxxxxx

[AprilRN1210]

ok.... as tears are streaming down my face.... and I have chills everywhere... I am attempting to compose myself.. between your words and this song... I am undone... omg... Frieda... I will have to come back... to leave coherent review..

[Frieda P]

If you 'felt' this one, that's a grand review in itself sweet April...x

[AprilRN1210]

I don't know how anyone cannot FEEL this one... seriously... you always touch me so deep girl.. "your voice" is truly amazing and beautiful..

[Frieda P]

You've touched my heart in saying so, thanks so much April...*smiling* at you. :) x

[AprilRN1210]

no, thank you... you always touch mine... **smiling** back at you... ok.. quit making me cry... jeez..

[Frieda P]

Why should I cry alone, when I have you? :)

[AprilRN1210]

yes, I guess you are right... you have me there ma'am... little bit of warning though.. damn... it hits me like a train.. I swear within two minutes of opening this I was crying like a baby...

[Lyn Anderson]

I really hate dried flowers. They remind me of death. Yes, I get this. Hugs.

[Frieda P]

I don't get dried flowers either, thanks KL...sorry you do xo