_this is not goodbye, love you to the moon and back, miss you more than life itself ♥♥
You can't flutter by,
and not affect everyone
you've so graciously touched,
heart of gold wrapped
in ethereal veiled wings of strength
we gazed upon your emboldenedflight
right from the beginning of time
blustering storms now overshadowed,
cast in your onward flight
yet, so bittersweet you've risen
above the ashen earth's rebound
destined for skies of brilliance
free from ambivalence's rhyme
awash in your splendor ofglory
overcoming in your wayward graces,
what may be is still a mystery
to all of those who believe,
tomorrow's whispering promises linger
on a zephyr quietly awaiting ~
~you can't flutterby and not affect everyone you've touched~
“It has been said, 'time heals all wounds.' I do not agree. The wounds remain. In time, the mind, protecting its sanity, covers them with scar tissue and the pain lessens. But it is never gone.” ― Rose Kennedy
Oh Frieda, of all of your poetry, you have written for, or about your sister, this one is very special, in the way, you have written the perfect eulogy for her. I hope, when my time comes, I have someone like you, to tell the world, who I was, as a person, a friend and a sister, to them. Thank you, for sharing this poem, with us.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You're back, thanks for your kind review therisa, so nice to see you again.
10 Years Ago
Your welcome, and thank you, Frieda. Been struggling with my latest anti-depressant/anxiety med, sin.. read moreYour welcome, and thank you, Frieda. Been struggling with my latest anti-depressant/anxiety med, since mid-June, which has left me, apartment bound, with severe agoraphobia and anxiety attacks.
10 Years Ago
Oh that doesn't sound good, chin up and hang in there therisa.
It isn't, Frieda, but has provided a lot of poetry, written over the past 5 weeks. Not sure, what to.. read moreIt isn't, Frieda, but has provided a lot of poetry, written over the past 5 weeks. Not sure, what to do with these poems. To hide them, in my don't post file or share a limited few, with the greater world.
10 Years Ago
You should share them, there's always someone out there who can relate, I think poetry makes us feel.. read moreYou should share them, there's always someone out there who can relate, I think poetry makes us feel less alone in our darkest hours.
10 Years Ago
Sigh, have 96 poems to transcribe first, before I can do anything with them. Not a task, I'm looking.. read moreSigh, have 96 poems to transcribe first, before I can do anything with them. Not a task, I'm looking forward to. We'll see, Frieda.
"You can't flutter by,
and not affect everyone"-- the brilliance of the 1st two lines easily prophesies of the brilliance of the rest of the poem. Artfully worded(as ever!) I really enjoyed this today, and I hope to see you back soon.
This is poignant Frieda Her imprint is everywhere you look and the pain is deep but I love how you capture her beauty and know her love flutters brightly around you. Thinking of you.
Oh Frieda, of all of your poetry, you have written for, or about your sister, this one is very special, in the way, you have written the perfect eulogy for her. I hope, when my time comes, I have someone like you, to tell the world, who I was, as a person, a friend and a sister, to them. Thank you, for sharing this poem, with us.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You're back, thanks for your kind review therisa, so nice to see you again.
10 Years Ago
Your welcome, and thank you, Frieda. Been struggling with my latest anti-depressant/anxiety med, sin.. read moreYour welcome, and thank you, Frieda. Been struggling with my latest anti-depressant/anxiety med, since mid-June, which has left me, apartment bound, with severe agoraphobia and anxiety attacks.
10 Years Ago
Oh that doesn't sound good, chin up and hang in there therisa.
It isn't, Frieda, but has provided a lot of poetry, written over the past 5 weeks. Not sure, what to.. read moreIt isn't, Frieda, but has provided a lot of poetry, written over the past 5 weeks. Not sure, what to do with these poems. To hide them, in my don't post file or share a limited few, with the greater world.
10 Years Ago
You should share them, there's always someone out there who can relate, I think poetry makes us feel.. read moreYou should share them, there's always someone out there who can relate, I think poetry makes us feel less alone in our darkest hours.
10 Years Ago
Sigh, have 96 poems to transcribe first, before I can do anything with them. Not a task, I'm looking.. read moreSigh, have 96 poems to transcribe first, before I can do anything with them. Not a task, I'm looking forward to. We'll see, Frieda.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..