I breathe you in...

I breathe you in,

my world expands

     making me  feel

whole again,

in this moment of time,

pain is soothed

  mysteries of life come alive

    beauty surrounds

my senses

even angst is a study

in survival

I hear symbiotic

 rhythm's rhyme

   & the dance is perfumed

in clarity

hushed whispers

of insanity's rush

  playing a sweet tempo

in staccato notes

lulling me on tranquility's 

crystal clear clouds

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

This to me could be about either someone very close to you like a lover or a dear friend, or it could be a reference to spirituality. Either way it is a very calming piece of work, letting us realize that while life twists and turns us around like a tornado, there is still comfort to be had, simply by breathing in the positive vibrations around us. Great song choice by the way, I feel like I haven't heard this one in way too long.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Ashira, I love your interpretation, you're a very astute poetess dear.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is wonderful. A goosebump giver again. Love is like this, and its intensity fills the soul, and touches every part.

[Frieda P]

I knew you'd relate in your present state, thanks KL. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A gentle flowing expression of the high we get from being thrilled by another human being, from really wanting them to be special to us. Lovely my Lady, lovely!

[Frieda P]

I love that 'high'....thanks so much John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yep it is a special emotion. Given your passage I am even happier that you feel it my Lady.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Just noticed you used the same picture I used?

[Frieda P]

For which poem?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Found it at last! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Passion8/1382433/

[Matching Socks]

What a gift, finding that person that brings us peace. That we feel safe with.
Great write. :)

[Frieda P]

A gift indeed, thanks Ana Sophia, back so soon? ;)

[Matching Socks]

No... Apparently I'm not needed as much as I thought I'd be. :)

[Frieda P]

I guess you're not complaining right? More time for you. ;)

[Matching Socks]

No complaints. :)