I breathe you in...

I breathe you in...

A Poem by Frieda P
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I breathe you in,
my world expands
     making me  feel
whole again,
in this moment of time,
pain is soothed
  mysteries of life come alive
    beauty surrounds
my senses
even angst is a study
in survival
I hear symbiotic
 rhythm's rhyme
   & the dance is perfumed
in clarity
hushed whispers
of insanity's rush
  playing a sweet tempo
in staccato notes
lulling me on tranquility's 
crystal clear clouds


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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This to me could be about either someone very close to you like a lover or a dear friend, or it could be a reference to spirituality. Either way it is a very calming piece of work, letting us realize that while life twists and turns us around like a tornado, there is still comfort to be had, simply by breathing in the positive vibrations around us. Great song choice by the way, I feel like I haven't heard this one in way too long.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ashira, I love your interpretation, you're a very astute poetess dear.



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Solitude, beauty and clouds accentuated by such heart warming fresh music can swoon a million hearts.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You know I love that word 'swoon', grazie mille Avinash...
"I hear symbiotic
rhythm's rhyme
& the dance is perfumed
in clarity"

I could languish here for days, reading and rereading this. The song by Anna Nalick gave it wings...just beautiful, Frieda!


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kelly, good to see you, jazz'd you enjoyed!
A rather soothing diddy. I like the way it ended with the musical cloud thing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A rather soothing diddy. I like the way it ended with the musical cloud thing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A rather soothing diddy. I like the way it ended with the musical cloud thing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Baby x's 3....
Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

The site's being weird, again
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Again? Always...I know just busting your chops...
I am again mesmerized by your spellbinding words of romance and tenderness. And people call me a romantic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Woo mesmerized and spellbinding in one review, thanks Dale! :)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome Moonbeam.
Beautiful write. Just beautiful. So much imagery and emotion crafted so wonderfully. I always love your writing! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks very much Michael, glad you enjoyed this one and you're very kind to say. :)
"just beathe".... "in the mysteries of life" ... this is such a wonderful poem Frieda, gently felt and yet the perfumed dance and staccato notes speak boldly... just breathe, something I am having a hard time doing as my heart is caught in my throat beating clarity... I am always amazed how your words leave me in need of more (words, mysteries, life.. everything..)
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Words, words, words, you gotta love em....grazie mille my poetic friend. :) x
This is a most welcome change from my filth Mrs.R ha ;) Seriously though, this is gorgeous, like a kiss on the imagination...a perfumed dance...nobody can dress a dance in so many guises as you love...and the crystal clear clouds, another lovely image...this is a poem that wraps its arms around you...true beauty in these words :) xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Okay, as long as you remember the important part...or parts should I say? ;)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

AS IF..............
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha No comment necessary ;)
To know that real mind connection...nothing like it, the sheer power to just be and breathe...a blessing when felt xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Indeed it is, thanks so much Poppy xo

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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