This to me could be about either someone very close to you like a lover or a dear friend, or it could be a reference to spirituality. Either way it is a very calming piece of work, letting us realize that while life twists and turns us around like a tornado, there is still comfort to be had, simply by breathing in the positive vibrations around us. Great song choice by the way, I feel like I haven't heard this one in way too long.
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Ashira, I love your interpretation, you're a very astute poetess dear.
"just beathe".... "in the mysteries of life" ... this is such a wonderful poem Frieda, gently felt and yet the perfumed dance and staccato notes speak boldly... just breathe, something I am having a hard time doing as my heart is caught in my throat beating clarity... I am always amazed how your words leave me in need of more (words, mysteries, life.. everything..)
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Words, words, words, you gotta love em....grazie mille my poetic friend. :) x
This is a most welcome change from my filth Mrs.R ha ;) Seriously though, this is gorgeous, like a kiss on the imagination...a perfumed dance...nobody can dress a dance in so many guises as you love...and the crystal clear clouds, another lovely image...this is a poem that wraps its arms around you...true beauty in these words :) xo
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10 Years Ago
Ha whatever are you talking about Benji? Thanks so much sweetie, I'm thrilled you liked my perfumed.. read moreHa whatever are you talking about Benji? Thanks so much sweetie, I'm thrilled you liked my perfumed dance. :) xo
10 Years Ago
Oh you know, that stuff haha Always a pleasure reading your work love :) xo
10 Years Ago
You must mean boobies and beer, that wasn't filth, that was artistic bedlam. ;) x
10 Years Ago
Haha Now don't forget my poem thinking about that song love ;) x
10 Years Ago
Umm I'm pretty sure it was about boobies...unless I read it all wrong ;)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..