I breathe you in...

I breathe you in...

A Poem by Frieda P
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I breathe you in,
my world expands
     making me  feel
whole again,
in this moment of time,
pain is soothed
  mysteries of life come alive
    beauty surrounds
my senses
even angst is a study
in survival
I hear symbiotic
 rhythm's rhyme
   & the dance is perfumed
in clarity
hushed whispers
of insanity's rush
  playing a sweet tempo
in staccato notes
lulling me on tranquility's 
crystal clear clouds


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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This to me could be about either someone very close to you like a lover or a dear friend, or it could be a reference to spirituality. Either way it is a very calming piece of work, letting us realize that while life twists and turns us around like a tornado, there is still comfort to be had, simply by breathing in the positive vibrations around us. Great song choice by the way, I feel like I haven't heard this one in way too long.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ashira, I love your interpretation, you're a very astute poetess dear.



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what an uplifting piece... reminds me of what I do to feel better... I tune out the world, turn on certain songs, and get lost in the words, the tempo, the rhythm, it carries me away, soothes, heals, and in that moment---everything is right... it is like you can breathe again... it isn't the end of the tunnel but it does give a moment's pause to take that breather, get your sanity back, and continue on that journey... what a perfect song to accompany...

It also reminds me of taking that moment, to stop what you are doing and just take everything in.. just enjoy the beauty of nature......It makes you happy for that brief moment, within that pause-everything makes sense... you are free...

ok.. I could keep going on and on about what it reminds me of.. but the point is.. you touched me.. and I really needed to read this one today.. I am saving this one for sure... it is absolutely beautiful as always...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

yea, I tend to do the same thing.... great minds.... ((hugs))
that or spice...ha... yea well.... read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Exactly, wherever the winds blows us poetically. :) xo
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

agreed..... Pretty cool I finally found someone as whirlwind and free as me... ((hugs)) my fellow gy.. read more
Love the title! This is deliciously dripped in colour. Has a sensual feeling. Your style is easily absorbed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your visit and review Mary, glad you enjoyed!
Despite the deepest pain and angst we find moments of peaceful comfort by breathing in the essence of some thing or person. Theres truth in this poem..ive experienced it myself. Even in our darkness a small light can shine. x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Glad you felt this one Red, I'm pretty sure the air is Belize is sweeter, if you know what I mean? ;.. read more
Feeling everything whilst inflated with bliss courtesy of they who inspire you to be so joyous as to feel as if you were soaring through the skies and dancing with the stars can be quite lovely and this piece does an excellent job of making that clear. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Tai, dancing with the stars would be exquisite....
I breathe you in- yes you breathe the optimism around you.life may be full of storms and gales. Still there is something or someone we can hold on to.. This style of yours is different and i liked it.Everyone has the right to happiness so why close up?? :) Very nice piece N***a. It soothed me.. thanks for sharing..

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

So jazz'd, soothing was what I was hoping for grazie Sophie!
Oh my God, can I stay here forever? Can your page and writes be my safe haven as they always have? You realise that your writes speak to me more than anyone's and they literally are my safe haven. When I read you, it's like you wrap me in a mothers cocoon. :)

Anyway, off topic there for a mo, this was out of this world. I got a few different interpretations when I read it, considering I read if like 5 times... Absolutely adore this one.

Flip flops & all that jazz, mama F...xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Of course, I just redid your room, want a cuppa? ;) xo
s y e

10 Years Ago

Oooooo, I'm coming!! New room AND a cuppa, damn right I do!xo
Simply to live for the things and people we love...we could breathe in with serenity.
I love what I have read tonight...all were inspiring. And I commend that this one is really applicable in love and life.
I love this one, Ms. F. Keep shining!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your sweet words Dhaye!
I think I've been taken to romantic wonderland, Frieda. I am in awe, spellbound even, wow. This was something else, for sure -- different from your James Dean poem for sure! ;))

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kayleigh! :) Yep, no bad boys here...
there is a reason the Lord is called the breath of Life ;)
"even angst is a study
in survival"

love that .. good and bad, happy and sad .. up and down .. its all good .. lets breeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeath!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :)

what a fine blissful poem .. great read for me this morning!
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

10 Years Ago

OK! :)) and some more to post this!
E.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You know I'm a sarcastic joisey goil, can't help it! :P
Einstein Noodle

10 Years Ago

so why do we love you? ... you all dat ... dats why ...
:) love love love you Ms. joisey!read more
I felt you were breathing in the spirit of oneness that comes from knowing the true self, a gorgeous poem of exquisite verse that just drifts on a sea of love...................please excuse that I have not read read requests before now, I'm still finding my way round here and have not noticed them before, so sorry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Takes a bit of a while to get used to the site, thanks for the luverly review Richard.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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