~bleached out blue jeans and James Dean

just some eye candy for the girls ;)

Bleached out blue jeans

     and broken dreams,

ripping at the seams of my soul

   as you strutted your stuff,

unraveled in lusty affection's turn

torn apart of faded intentions

   inky patches of forget-me-knots

in dyed midnight illusions

     tied to the darkly hue'd' requiem

     of your rogue stylish charms 

killer looks and James Dean appeal

  left me stranded and hooked

     in your game of gangsta's paradise

unbuttoned of chain'd denial

  my heart's anticipation of big dreams

out of rhythm'd time pacin' to an

          old burning promised dance

no rhyme left in 'til the end of time'

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Ha, you want me to review THIS Mrs.R? ;P First off, yes, I know you're having fun, don't worry...I have this vision of your forehead going right to your palm when you see that question...but I'll be honest, if anyone else besides you wrote this, I'd be swiftly moving on to the next poem...this will be ironic if I get the first review in, insanely ironic if it's the featured one...I'm giggling just thinking about that actually haha ...still it probably won't surprise you that line two is my favourite, and the last line is absolute money...I wonder if my character from that elevator poem is anything like this ;P Nicely done my dear...I wanna go buy some jeans now..xo

[Frieda P]

I was ready and waiting for it ha ha you should see my face...yep facepalm'd it ;) Just trying to loosen you up Benji. I see you got your sense of humor back love. ;) MWAH! xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm doing my best Mrs.R...and it IS the featured review...now that is pretty funny haha MWAH ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Karma baby...haha ;) x

[kublakhan27]

OMG This site...for the third time, let's try this response Mrs.R: Yep, instant karma got me ;) x

[Frieda P]

I know, it's even worse than usual....see, what your step Benji. ;) x

[Lyn Anderson]

The music goes with it, but I will play that cheesy pop song in my head with the blue jeans and the ripped shirt. But anyway, nice sexy write.

[Frieda P]

I like cheesy sometimes, did you watch the video, hardly cheesy....

[Joe_VILOT_]

cheesy come-one its candy syrup sweet honey toned cassidy blues
hmm jamming with Dean more like

[Lyn Anderson]

No, this one is not cheesy. The one I am thinking about is by Carly Rae Jepsen? spelling, I don't know pop.

[Joe_VILOT_]

well cassidy blues i made up on the spot just describing the feel about it and the comment as well cool