transcended to a higher plane ~

Women in the Garden, Femmes au jardin ~ Claude Monet

I am transcended to a higher plane

    within your passage's inclinations

your path, a destiny of affinity's eternal hope

 following along the long and winding road of druthers, 

hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture

celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's

 spirit within your tribulations,

you are the balm that soothes the angst

the essential foundation of which clouds reside,

ascending horizons of the gods in good faith

communion within breaking bread

 & services of sentiment's solace,

dwelling in the realm of tranquility's

vastly intrinsic nature

blooming within the affection of

 rapport's inklings,

as Monet's grand finessed brush strokes

and Beethoven't moonlight sonata,

one in the same distinction,

garden of Eden's contemplation sans sinful crush

harmony's holy endearments amidst

a poetic rush 

of nectar'd utterances 

Author's Note

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Reading the stunning lines and listening to the Moonlight Sonata, I was transported to that Garden of the First Sinful Crush. I am humbled by your poetry...

"hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture
celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's
spirit within your tribulations,
you are the balm that soothes the angst
the essential foundation of which clouds reside,
ascending horizons of the gods in good faith"

You took your reader to a higher plane. One of sheer beauty, peace and tranquility. And I do not want to come back. Frieda...Applause!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your gorgeous review sweet Divya, muchly appreciated my friend! I'm so glad you felt transported by this one.

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome Frieda. Thanks for introducing me to Beethoven, I know I know it's a bit late in the day but then better a thing of beauty be enjoyed late than never! :)

[Frieda P]

Oh my, you must have never read Beethoven in my loins....ha you're a virgin ;)

[Cory Barrett]

good god talk about opulence, this drips of silks and sugar enough to calm a seaside storm. What a lovely piece you have here!

[Frieda P]

Wow opulence, thanks so much Cory....love that word by the way, thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love encapsulated in mere words my Lady and so eloquent and informed and learned. There is enchantment here, dreams and hopes and gentle surender.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much John.