transcended to a higher plane ~

Women in the Garden, Femmes au jardin ~ Claude Monet

I am transcended to a higher plane

    within your passage's inclinations

your path, a destiny of affinity's eternal hope

 following along the long and winding road of druthers, 

hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture

celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's

 spirit within your tribulations,

you are the balm that soothes the angst

the essential foundation of which clouds reside,

ascending horizons of the gods in good faith

communion within breaking bread

 & services of sentiment's solace,

dwelling in the realm of tranquility's

vastly intrinsic nature

blooming within the affection of

 rapport's inklings,

as Monet's grand finessed brush strokes

and Beethoven't moonlight sonata,

one in the same distinction,

garden of Eden's contemplation sans sinful crush

harmony's holy endearments amidst

a poetic rush 

of nectar'd utterances 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ayvid N]

Reading the stunning lines and listening to the Moonlight Sonata, I was transported to that Garden of the First Sinful Crush. I am humbled by your poetry...

"hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture
celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's
spirit within your tribulations,
you are the balm that soothes the angst
the essential foundation of which clouds reside,
ascending horizons of the gods in good faith"

You took your reader to a higher plane. One of sheer beauty, peace and tranquility. And I do not want to come back. Frieda...Applause!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your gorgeous review sweet Divya, muchly appreciated my friend! I'm so glad you felt transported by this one.

[Ayvid N]

You are most welcome Frieda. Thanks for introducing me to Beethoven, I know I know it's a bit late in the day but then better a thing of beauty be enjoyed late than never! :)

[Frieda P]

Oh my, you must have never read Beethoven in my loins....ha you're a virgin ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am feeling this right now----that shelter from the storm....my rock....been a lot going on here and there, but she stands by me...always....it feels like a symphony.....in the middle of a head banger's concert...this is a buffet of incredible images....

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words jacob.

[redzone]

WC is really fowl tonight, this is the third attempt to review your poem... Frieda, you weave Monet and Beethoven's "Moonlight Sonnata" into a muscial word painting that has enraptured me and anyone who reads this enlightened poem. Floating on "a poetic rush / of nectar'd utterances", I find the peaceful resonance of "hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture
celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's
spirit within your tribulations,
you are the balm that soothes the angst
the essential foundation of which clouds reside," and think this is the heart of your poem..
Frieda, you have created a real maswterpiece of poetry here and I cannot help but be pulled into your "transedence to a higher plane"... hope you don't mind the company, cause I really don't want to leave...
It's simply elegantly fantastically beautiful Frieda and so are you..
~~redzone MWAHxxoo!!!

1000 Monet's Garden and Moonlight Sonatas playing...

[Frieda P]

You are too kind Curt, you humble me as always, thanks so much, much love. xo

[Matching Socks]

Something about your writing makes me want to read, re-read and float with it...Lovely write.

[Frieda P]

Always happy to have you float in my poetry Ana Sophia, thanks so much.

[Lydia Shutter]

Invoking the names of Monet and Beethoven....ah, so very romantic! This is definitely a "poetic rush". When love can soothe the angst of life, it is the real thing. So gentle and velvety soft....really lovely. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Oh velvety, I love that, thanks so much Lydikey.

[willweb]

My, this was a stunning poem today Frieda P. A work of art for certain. I read this 3 times and may read it again. I really loved this poem today.

[Frieda P]

I'm so honored Will, thanks so much.

[Lyn Anderson]

"The balm that soothes the angst" -- everyone should have one of those -- a lovely piece again, melancholy with a dash of hope.

[Frieda P]

They should sell the stuff, thanks KL.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I locked my seatbelt and there i go in the divine flight of Freida's soothing lullaby.. You had flown me to the place of poetic solace.. i like beethoven's moonlit sonata.. ;) But what i liked the most was the metaphor of communion and service blended with Birthing sin- Garden of eden... All these played an immense role in firing the mind of the reader to something heavenly and pure.. Its a new taste,from your side.And i must say you are good at this too Chica ;)

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your kind words Sophy, glad you were transported. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yo... :) it was my pleasure Amiga

[A. Amos]

Enjoyed the flight of elegance with you, words and music both were mesmerzing...well done!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille sweet A, muchly appreciated!

[B-poet]

A rich and enlightening write with a touch of melodic spirituality. Great work Frieda. A divine write & read. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Bpoet, glad you enjoyed :)

[Einstein Noodle]

these are my flavories exotica! :
"harmony's holy endearments amidst
a poetic rush
of nectar'd utterances "

now where is the Monet???? come on girl! .. he is .. yes i am pretty sure he is my favorite .. what a lovely blend "transcended to a higher plane " brings .. "following along the long and winding road of druthers, " .. you ARE the Freida! :) love you girl!
E.

[Frieda P]

The Monet is in the graphic, best I could do love.... :) Grazie mille sweet E!

[Einstein Noodle]

i would have missed it! his paintings are so mescalinic .. not that i would know of course .. but i have read about it ;)