transcended to a higher plane ~

Women in the Garden, Femmes au jardin ~ Claude Monet

I am transcended to a higher plane

    within your passage's inclinations

your path, a destiny of affinity's eternal hope

 following along the long and winding road of druthers, 

hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture

celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's

 spirit within your tribulations,

you are the balm that soothes the angst

the essential foundation of which clouds reside,

ascending horizons of the gods in good faith

communion within breaking bread

 & services of sentiment's solace,

dwelling in the realm of tranquility's

vastly intrinsic nature

blooming within the affection of

 rapport's inklings,

as Monet's grand finessed brush strokes

and Beethoven't moonlight sonata,

one in the same distinction,

garden of Eden's contemplation sans sinful crush

harmony's holy endearments amidst

a poetic rush 

of nectar'd utterances 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ayvid N]

Reading the stunning lines and listening to the Moonlight Sonata, I was transported to that Garden of the First Sinful Crush. I am humbled by your poetry...

"hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture
celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's
spirit within your tribulations,
you are the balm that soothes the angst
the essential foundation of which clouds reside,
ascending horizons of the gods in good faith"

You took your reader to a higher plane. One of sheer beauty, peace and tranquility. And I do not want to come back. Frieda...Applause!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your gorgeous review sweet Divya, muchly appreciated my friend! I'm so glad you felt transported by this one.

[Ayvid N]

You are most welcome Frieda. Thanks for introducing me to Beethoven, I know I know it's a bit late in the day but then better a thing of beauty be enjoyed late than never! :)

[Frieda P]

Oh my, you must have never read Beethoven in my loins....ha you're a virgin ;)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Where do these deep-dwelling lines surface? In the tranquility of silence, or the hurried craziness of a life lived to the fullest? Do your muses release these chains of gold one link at a time, or are they spun like Rumpelstilskin's skeins of gold strand after strand until the room is full? Your genious fascinates me, my friend. Where are you and when are you coming back for good?

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A well chosen piece of music to accompany a beautiful poem.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This has a serene beauty to it chica.Every line is absolutely breathtaking ;-)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Vidya, I was actually pleased with the way this one turned out, you know how we are as poets, never satisfied. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I know girl.It was so beautiful .You are welcome chica ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Sorry for the late response on this Mrs.R, I would have sworn I reviewed it before, which always means that I've read it already...there is something about this Moonlight Sonata that brings out and amplifies your peaceful side...every poem you write compels me to point out yet another trademark of your genius...in this case, it's the ability to draw from other forms of art to produce a written piece of art that is unmistakably you...I don't do this enough in my work, I get too caught up in my own mind...more often than not, your poetry is the balm that soothes MY angst, and this is no exception...as always, your images are colourful and imaginative...and brilliant...xo

[Frieda P]

You humble me my sweet friend, thanks from the bottom of my heart. xo

[kublakhan27]

You know it's always a pleasure love :) xo

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW,WOW Frieda, AMAZING! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! :-) NIcely penned. ;-)

[Frieda P]

Wooo two wow's, thanks so much Snow_Angel! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, Frieda. :-)

[Ruth]

I sit here, read this three times...paused over the keys and read again... my lack of response here isn't through lack of words, it is through sitting with my mouth open and expression glazed with being deeply, deeply moved by this work of art. Sensational love, truly sensational poetry! xo

[Frieda P]

You've moved me with your kind words Poppy, I am truly humbled, especially having someone as talented such as yourself feel this one so deeply, thank you from my heart bella! xo

[Ruth]

Always my pleasure love, truly ♥

[Joe_VILOT_]

yeah the angst to untimely wrap enfold creep such a sweet sweeping nurturing food of the Gods Ambrosia!
Ah! I must have More!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and review Joe.

[Joe_VILOT_]

cheers what did you make of the comment?

[Tai Ryens]

A perceived perfection in another person that allows you to transcend into an entirely new, unseen tier of bliss that you never knew existed, and would have never known existed had it not been for the person who had caused you to transcend beyond what you thought you were capable of, and what you thought limited you in terms of the rush that happiness can bring to us in life. I see it in your words, the person your speaker speaks of is so lovely that they makes everything around them lovely as well. Quite the extravagant read, and I enjoyed muchly.

[Frieda P]

I muchly enjoy reading your reviews Tai, thanks so much, you made my morning smile.

[Moonie]

This was just spectacular, dear Frieda. My favourite lines would be:
"as Monet's grand finessed brush strokes
and Beethoven't moonlight sonata"

[Frieda P]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one Moon, thanks so much...

[Moonie]

You are most welcome! =)

[Moonie]

You are most welcome! =)

[Moonie]

You are most welcome! =)

[emmajoy]

This makes me feel so many things, must be the union of music and words so beautiful that pausing here brings a sense of both sweet peace and determined hope.

'.. celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's spirit within your tribulations, you are the balm that soothes the angst.. ' - words that understand and trust.

Have missed your ability to create wonder from a mere twenty six letters.

[Frieda P]

Am always enthralled when someone says they 'feel' the words, thanks so much my sweet petulia, so happy to see you here....xo