Reading the stunning lines and listening to the Moonlight Sonata, I was transported to that Garden of the First Sinful Crush. I am humbled by your poetry...
"hearts beating exponentially in joyous rapture
celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's
spirit within your tribulations,
you are the balm that soothes the angst
the essential foundation of which clouds reside,
ascending horizons of the gods in good faith"
You took your reader to a higher plane. One of sheer beauty, peace and tranquility. And I do not want to come back. Frieda...Applause!
Thanks so much for your gorgeous review sweet Divya, muchly appreciated my friend! I'm so glad you f.. read moreThanks so much for your gorgeous review sweet Divya, muchly appreciated my friend! I'm so glad you felt transported by this one.
10 Years Ago
You are most welcome Frieda. Thanks for introducing me to Beethoven, I know I know it's a bit late i.. read moreYou are most welcome Frieda. Thanks for introducing me to Beethoven, I know I know it's a bit late in the day but then better a thing of beauty be enjoyed late than never! :)
10 Years Ago
Oh my, you must have never read Beethoven in my loins....ha you're a virgin ;)
Where do these deep-dwelling lines surface? In the tranquility of silence, or the hurried craziness of a life lived to the fullest? Do your muses release these chains of gold one link at a time, or are they spun like Rumpelstilskin's skeins of gold strand after strand until the room is full? Your genious fascinates me, my friend. Where are you and when are you coming back for good?
This has a serene beauty to it chica.Every line is absolutely breathtaking ;-)
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Vidya, I was actually pleased with the way this one turned out, you know how we are a.. read moreThanks so much Vidya, I was actually pleased with the way this one turned out, you know how we are as poets, never satisfied. :)
10 Years Ago
I know girl.It was so beautiful .You are welcome chica ;-)
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Sorry for the late response on this Mrs.R, I would have sworn I reviewed it before, which always means that I've read it already...there is something about this Moonlight Sonata that brings out and amplifies your peaceful side...every poem you write compels me to point out yet another trademark of your genius...in this case, it's the ability to draw from other forms of art to produce a written piece of art that is unmistakably you...I don't do this enough in my work, I get too caught up in my own mind...more often than not, your poetry is the balm that soothes MY angst, and this is no exception...as always, your images are colourful and imaginative...and brilliant...xo
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10 Years Ago
You humble me my sweet friend, thanks from the bottom of my heart. xo
I sit here, read this three times...paused over the keys and read again... my lack of response here isn't through lack of words, it is through sitting with my mouth open and expression glazed with being deeply, deeply moved by this work of art. Sensational love, truly sensational poetry! xo
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10 Years Ago
You've moved me with your kind words Poppy, I am truly humbled, especially having someone as talente.. read moreYou've moved me with your kind words Poppy, I am truly humbled, especially having someone as talented such as yourself feel this one so deeply, thank you from my heart bella! xo
A perceived perfection in another person that allows you to transcend into an entirely new, unseen tier of bliss that you never knew existed, and would have never known existed had it not been for the person who had caused you to transcend beyond what you thought you were capable of, and what you thought limited you in terms of the rush that happiness can bring to us in life. I see it in your words, the person your speaker speaks of is so lovely that they makes everything around them lovely as well. Quite the extravagant read, and I enjoyed muchly.
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10 Years Ago
I muchly enjoy reading your reviews Tai, thanks so much, you made my morning smile.
This makes me feel so many things, must be the union of music and words so beautiful that pausing here brings a sense of both sweet peace and determined hope.
'.. celebrating the humanity of tomorrow's spirit within your tribulations, you are the balm that soothes the angst.. ' - words that understand and trust.
Have missed your ability to create wonder from a mere twenty six letters.
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10 Years Ago
Am always enthralled when someone says they 'feel' the words, thanks so much my sweet petulia, so ha.. read moreAm always enthralled when someone says they 'feel' the words, thanks so much my sweet petulia, so happy to see you here....xo
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..