surrender under gypsy stardust ~

surrendered under gypsy stardust,

   our dance an inflamed kiss 

skies impassioned the intensity

  of fervent moonbeam's heated embrace

filled my wildest aching desires

   within your ardor's fiery captivation

enthralling an enchanted sunset's obscurity

     knees went weak in a zealous fulfilled sunrise,

sensation's of endmost satiated gusto,

   shorelines met the heavens in exquisite divinity

breathless in the glory of worlds imploding,

  chanted to the gods on wind's splendor

rode the dark stallion until the

           resplendent bliss of night burst forth

                                 in contented ecstasy 

Author's Note

Andrew Atroshenko ~ Gypsy Painting

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

oooooooh back to the heat and spice that you do so well.. yum.... but you knew I would be melting all over this one... they sensual rhythm of the music mirrors the erotic dance of nature as it prepares for the naughty magic of the night.. love it... the word choice again is so deliciously sexy and palpable as it reaches out and tingles in all the right places... oooh yes ma'am.. lovely.. bliss... :)

[Frieda P]

Ooooh la la, another sweet review, gotta love when nature gets naughty. ;) Thanks so much April. :)

[AprilRN1210]

Yes ma'am. Indeed.. As always, my pleasure :)

[kublakhan27]

Well, once again I'm compelled to find new wording to express how acute you are in taking the reader into your world via the resplendent portal of your poetry...wait, that's a new way of saying it right? ;) This makes me want to pack up and join the gypsy life, only if I can be a part of your tribe though ;) The cosmic imagery is really what drives this one out of the park, especially the meeting of the shoreline and the heavens...it just seems to go hand-in-hand with the gypsy theme...and the dancing of course, sealed with a kiss...it's so wanton and gently romantic at once, but that's what Mrs.R does...lucky is the gypsy to whom this is addressed, I'll say that ;) Another gem my dear, what more can one say? xo

[Frieda P]

Hardly matters how you say it, I always feel the genuine sentiment and acceptance of your words Benji I hope you're ready to tango. :) Thanks so much Sweetie. xo

[kublakhan27]

I'm always ready to tango Mrs.R ;) it's always a pleasure my dear friend..xo

[Frieda P]

If I lead does that mean I have to dip you? haha just saying. ;)

[kublakhan27]

Yes, until I get the nerve to dip you anyway ;)

[Frieda P]

Sounds provocative when you say it lol ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha It's funny how that happens only when I don't mean it ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Okay, you convinced me. I surrender

[Frieda P]

That wasn't too hard, thanks Baby.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It is strange how you capture such blissful concepts in these metaphors. You have such an individual style. There are few people who can be so creative with the quill my Lady. Sublime!

[Frieda P]

It's the gypsy in my soul John, I adore the word 'sublime' grazie mille sweetie!

[Matching Socks]

I'd love a cup of this magic stardust. It's the stuff that makes dreams come true. This was beautiful Freida.

[Matching Socks]

I'd love a cup of this magic stardust. It's the stuff that makes dreams come true. This was beautiful Freida.

[Matching Socks]

I'd love a cup of this magic stardust. It's the stuff that makes dreams come true. This was beautiful Freida.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, coming right up Ana Sophia! :)

[Matching Socks]

Thanks. :) jeez, don't know why it messaged 3 times. :) must be the lag up here.

[Frieda P]

You really wanted a cuppa that stardust I guess. :) How's your vacation going, see you got a bit of a reprieve here?

[Matching Socks]

So far so good but the reception is terrible! Especially for WC... Way too deep in the woods I guess. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You had me because of the title. I love the Gypsy life. Good music and spirited poetry. My favorite kind. We need inflamed kisses to make us wild in the deepness of the night. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I recognize your gypsy soul in your poetry John, I so agree, thanks so much for your kind words my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I always enjoy the poetry with dance and the Gypsies.