surrender under gypsy stardust ~

surrendered under gypsy stardust,

   our dance an inflamed kiss 

skies impassioned the intensity

  of fervent moonbeam's heated embrace

filled my wildest aching desires

   within your ardor's fiery captivation

enthralling an enchanted sunset's obscurity

     knees went weak in a zealous fulfilled sunrise,

sensation's of endmost satiated gusto,

   shorelines met the heavens in exquisite divinity

breathless in the glory of worlds imploding,

  chanted to the gods on wind's splendor

rode the dark stallion until the

           resplendent bliss of night burst forth

                                 in contented ecstasy 

Author's Note

Andrew Atroshenko ~ Gypsy Painting

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

oooooooh back to the heat and spice that you do so well.. yum.... but you knew I would be melting all over this one... they sensual rhythm of the music mirrors the erotic dance of nature as it prepares for the naughty magic of the night.. love it... the word choice again is so deliciously sexy and palpable as it reaches out and tingles in all the right places... oooh yes ma'am.. lovely.. bliss... :)

[Frieda P]

Ooooh la la, another sweet review, gotta love when nature gets naughty. ;) Thanks so much April. :)

[AprilRN1210]

Yes ma'am. Indeed.. As always, my pleasure :)

[Tate Morgan]

I am sure this deserves a full review so I will do that as soon as I get home your brain might be more scattered than mine your thoughts are certainly more metaphoric

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it sure is a nice feeling when the knees go weak....that natural reaction to someone....nothing thought out, or planned.....spontaneous combustion....BAM!

[Mayank]

when I read I literally felt like you whispering those words... I was enchanting and reading it again and again to absorb the beauty.

[Sophy Freebirds]

According to the li'l knowledge i have.. i guess that gypsies dance under the moonbeams,ripping off their clothes as their skin is kissed by it.Whoa !! What a lovely poetic description you've created.The wild poetic soul wants to do the gypsy dance.... i am gonna sing.. oooo la la la. !! And seriously this is such a passionate surrender of the gypsy. Like we surrender to our carnal desires in the heat of the night!! ;)

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

Silly girl, how else would one dance under a moonbeam? ;) So jazz'd you enjoyed my Gypsy's soul tryst Sophy! :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Rip off!! Ha.. :) i am doing hip hop like a silly :p It was a pleasure killer ;) and yea that devil of the devils is gonna be a latino .for sure.if they are as hot as you ★winks★

[redzone]

Frieda, are you seriously trying to unhinge my mind, twirl me in Gypsy magic and seduce me with "fulfilled sunrise, /sensation's of endmost satiated gusto"... cause if you are, (or even if you aren't) I am weak kneed and lying sated on these shore lines... But I suspect that you knew I would love this poem especially with lines like, "breathless in the glory of worlds imploding,"... but it really is unfair to pick out only some lines, especially since each line has it's breath taking "surrender"..

You also know how to weave the words you write with such inticing music... never heard this before but will hear it often now... the kind of music , like the poem that stays in your mind and reappears whenever it feel like it and without notice.. and I thought you said you couldn't sing... HA!!! I can only add, "I Surrender".. ;0) oxox

[Frieda P]

Woo what a blissful feel, you've made my night Curt...yep, exactly what I had in mind ;) You've never heard Ottmar Liebert, I love him, so talented, his music is delizioso! Ahh sweet surrender, I'm so jazz'd you enjoyed sweetie :) MWAH! xo

[Frieda P]

This is one of my favorites...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uh1isv5s0uo

[redzone]

ahhh Frieda, its Barcelona Nights, I know this song and yes LOVE IT!!! and now that I am listening to it I know Ottmar Liebert... but need to listen to more of his music.. Thanks for the musication Frieda..

[Frieda P]

Anytime love...he does a mean Samba Pa Ti too....

[wordman]

your wildest imagination touches my soul

[Frieda P]

What a sweet sentiment, thanks so much Ron.

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Lyn Anderson]

Very sexy and romantic, a warm and fuzzy feel to this one -- I feel like dancing on a beach now ...

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a plan to me KL, not sure you meant dancing though....

[Lyn Anderson]

Hmm, there are so many things I could say here ...

[Frieda P]

And I know exactly what they be ....haha

[Sami Khalil]

"shorelines met the heavens in exquisite divinity
breathless in the glory of worlds imploding,
chanted to the gods on wind's splendor"

A masterful write resplendent with enchantment and music galore. The gypsy spirit has it contented Ecstasy but with a fiery captivation...Excellent...:)..............................

[Frieda P]

I love the word 'resplendent'....thanks so much Sami, glad you enjoyed my gypsy tryst. ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome muchly...:)....

[Ashira Macy]

I love the vocabulary you used in this one dear, it bring the reader into a different world, full of magic and fantasy. I often try to find lines that call out to me more than the others in poems, but I found that in this piece every line was just as beautiful and intricate as all the others. Every line had at least one word that was a surprise to see in writing, ones rarely used. Stardust, gusto, imploding, resplendent to name a few. Gorgeous my dear poetess, thank you for this.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your charming review Ashira, you put a huge smile on my poetic heart. :)

[Fran Marie]

Blissfully beautiful in content and the music all make for a lovely enchanting piece...you have an awesome writing talent....

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Fran Marie, muchly appreciate your kind words.